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假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据提示给他回信。
要求：词数80~100。
审题指导：
1. 体裁：应用文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：第一人称和第二人称为主
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it’s a good idea to try some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, living a healthy lifestyle also has many benefits. You should maintain a balanced diet ① and allow enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day. What’s more, I suggest you not be too nervous and keep relaxed, or you can’t focus on your study ②. Finally, if you have any problems, feel free to talk ③ to your friends or teachers. ④
I hope my advice can help you. ⑤ I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点词块
① a balanced diet
均衡饮食
② focus on your study
专心学习
③ feel free to do sth.
随时做某事
高分句子
④ Finally, if you have any problems, feel free to talk to your friends or teachers.（if引导条件状语从句）最后，如果你遇到任何问题，随时与你的朋友或老师沟通。
⑤ I hope my advice can help you.（省略that的宾语从句）我希望我的建议能帮到你。
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 向你请教如何提高记忆力。请你根据提示给他回信。
要求：词数80~100。
审题指导：
1. 体裁：应用文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：第一人称和第二人称为主
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, in order to train your brain, it’s a good idea to try some new things and change your daily habits. In this way, you can make your brain more active and creative. Besides, living a healthy lifestyle also has many benefits. You should maintain a balanced diet ① and allow enough time for your brain to relax after a busy day. What’s more, I suggest you not be too nervous and keep relaxed, or you can’t focus on your study ②. Finally, if you have any problems, feel free to talk ③ to your friends or teachers. ④
I hope my advice can help you. ⑤ I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点词块
① a balanced diet
均衡饮食
② focus on your study
专心学习
③ feel free to do sth.
随时做某事
高分句子
④ Finally, if you have any problems, feel free to talk to your friends or teachers.（if引导条件状语从句）最后，如果你遇到任何问题，随时与你的朋友或老师沟通。
⑤ I hope my advice can help you.（省略that的宾语从句）我希望我的建议能帮到你。
答案
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, to train your brain, you can try new things and change your daily habits to make it more active. Besides, you need to keep a balanced diet and let your brain get enough rest every day. What's more, don't be too nervous and stay relaxed, or you can't focus on things well. If you meet any trouble, you can turn to people around you for help.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, to train your brain, you can try new things and change your daily habits to make it more active. Besides, you need to keep a balanced diet and let your brain get enough rest every day. What's more, don't be too nervous and stay relaxed, or you can't focus on things well. If you meet any trouble, you can turn to people around you for help.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Tom写回信，针对“如何提高记忆力”给出合理建议。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为书信，时态以一般现在时为主，人称使用第一、二人称；2. 遵循书信结构：开头点明写信目的，中间分点阐述具体建议，结尾表达期望；3. 运用指定亮点词块与高分句型，确保词数在80~100之间，符合题目要求。
【解析】写作步骤：①开头：用“I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.”直接点明写信目的；②中间分点提建议：先说明训练大脑的方法（尝试新事物、改变日常习惯），再提及健康生活的要点（均衡饮食、充足休息），接着强调保持放松的心态，最后说明遇到问题可向他人求助；③结尾：表达希望建议有帮助并期待对方进步，正确落款。
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, to train your brain, you can try new things and change your daily habits to make it more active. Besides, you need to keep a balanced diet and let your brain get enough rest every day. What's more, don't be too nervous and stay relaxed, or you can't focus on things well. If you meet any trouble, you can turn to people around you for help.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、提建议的表达、状语从句与宾语从句
【点评】该回信结构清晰，符合书信格式，运用了指定的亮点词块与高分句型，内容紧扣主题，词数符合要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：①开头：用“I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.”直接点明写信目的；②中间分点提建议：先说明训练大脑的方法（尝试新事物、改变日常习惯），再提及健康生活的要点（均衡饮食、充足休息），接着强调保持放松的心态，最后说明遇到问题可向他人求助；③结尾：表达希望建议有帮助并期待对方进步，正确落款。
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m glad to give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
First of all, to train your brain, you can try new things and change your daily habits to make it more active. Besides, you need to keep a balanced diet and let your brain get enough rest every day. What's more, don't be too nervous and stay relaxed, or you can't focus on things well. If you meet any trouble, you can turn to people around you for help.
I hope my advice can help you. I am looking forward to your improvement.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、提建议的表达、状语从句与宾语从句
【点评】该回信结构清晰，符合书信格式，运用了指定的亮点词块与高分句型，内容紧扣主题，词数符合要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
