Ⅺ.书面表达。
请以“My Last Holiday Trip”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你与家人或朋友的假期旅行。
要点包含:你们去了哪里?怎么去的?做了什么?感受如何?
注意:1.不少于60词;2.涵盖所有关键要点,可进行适当拓展。
My Last Holiday Trip
请以“My Last Holiday Trip”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你与家人或朋友的假期旅行。
要点包含:你们去了哪里?怎么去的?做了什么?感受如何?
注意:1.不少于60词;2.涵盖所有关键要点,可进行适当拓展。
My Last Holiday Trip
答案
My Last Holiday Trip
Last summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents. We went there by plane, and it took us about 3 hours to arrive.
The weather there was sunny and warm. We walked on the soft beautiful beach and swam in the clear blue sea. We also ate lots of tasty fresh seafood and took hundreds of funny photos. My father bought some special gifts for our relatives too.
We all had a great time in Sanya, and I felt so happy that I will never forget this wonderful trip.
Last summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents. We went there by plane, and it took us about 3 hours to arrive.
The weather there was sunny and warm. We walked on the soft beautiful beach and swam in the clear blue sea. We also ate lots of tasty fresh seafood and took hundreds of funny photos. My father bought some special gifts for our relatives too.
We all had a great time in Sanya, and I felt so happy that I will never forget this wonderful trip.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“My Last Holiday Trip”,需围绕四个核心要点(旅行目的地、交通方式、旅行活动、旅行感受)展开,时态需使用一般过去时(描述过去的旅行经历),同时要满足不少于60词的要求,可适当添加细节让内容更充实。
【解析】
1. 确定时态:全文采用一般过去时,契合描述过去旅行事件的语境;
2. 搭建写作框架:开头点明旅行的时间、同行人员、目的地及交通方式;中间详细描述旅行中的具体活动(游玩项目、饮食、购物等);结尾总结旅行的整体感受;
3. 填充细节:结合三亚的特色(海滩、海鲜等)拓展内容,确保覆盖所有要点,语句通顺且词数达标。
【答案】
My Last Holiday Trip
Last summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents. We went there by plane, and it took us about 3 hours to arrive.
The weather there was sunny and warm. We walked on the soft beautiful beach and swam in the clear blue sea. We also ate lots of tasty fresh seafood and took hundreds of funny photos. My father bought some special gifts for our relatives too.
We all had a great time in Sanya, and I felt so happy that I will never forget this wonderful trip.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用;英语话题写作;要点式书面表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有写作要点,时态正确,内容具体生动,细节丰富,符合词数要求,是一篇规范的英语书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“My Last Holiday Trip”,需围绕四个核心要点(旅行目的地、交通方式、旅行活动、旅行感受)展开,时态需使用一般过去时(描述过去的旅行经历),同时要满足不少于60词的要求,可适当添加细节让内容更充实。
【解析】
1. 确定时态:全文采用一般过去时,契合描述过去旅行事件的语境;
2. 搭建写作框架:开头点明旅行的时间、同行人员、目的地及交通方式;中间详细描述旅行中的具体活动(游玩项目、饮食、购物等);结尾总结旅行的整体感受;
3. 填充细节:结合三亚的特色(海滩、海鲜等)拓展内容,确保覆盖所有要点,语句通顺且词数达标。
【答案】
My Last Holiday Trip
Last summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents. We went there by plane, and it took us about 3 hours to arrive.
The weather there was sunny and warm. We walked on the soft beautiful beach and swam in the clear blue sea. We also ate lots of tasty fresh seafood and took hundreds of funny photos. My father bought some special gifts for our relatives too.
We all had a great time in Sanya, and I felt so happy that I will never forget this wonderful trip.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用;英语话题写作;要点式书面表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有写作要点,时态正确,内容具体生动,细节丰富,符合词数要求,是一篇规范的英语书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.3
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