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校园生活是同学们生活中很重要的组成部分,假设你是阳光中学(Sunshine Middle School)七年级的学生Mike,请你根据下面表格中的内容介绍一下你自己及你的学校。
【要求】1. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
2. 文章必须包含所有内容要点,并可作适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、地名、校名等信息。
My name is Mike. I am thirteen years old.
【要求】1. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
2. 文章必须包含所有内容要点,并可作适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、地名、校名等信息。
My name is Mike. I am thirteen years old.
I study in Sunshine Middle School. It is big. There are 20 classrooms in it.
And it has a music room and a computer room. There is a library too. I often go there to borrow books.
The playground is big. I often do morning exercises there.
I am in Class 1, Grade 7. My favourite subjects are Chinese, Maths and English. They are interesting. I like drawing because it is fun. I don't like playing basketball because I am not tall.
I like my school very much and I am happy at my school.
答案
One possible version:
My name is Mike. I am thirteen years old. I study in
Sunshine Middle School. It is big. There are 20 classrooms in
it. And it has a music room and a computer room. There is a
library too. I often go there to borrow books. The
playground is big. I often do morning exercises there.
I am in Class 1, Grade 7. My favourite subjects are
Chinese, Maths and English. They are interesting. I like
drawing because it is fun. I don't like playing basketball
because I am not tall.
I like my school very much and I am happy at my
school.
My name is Mike. I am thirteen years old. I study in
Sunshine Middle School. It is big. There are 20 classrooms in
it. And it has a music room and a computer room. There is a
library too. I often go there to borrow books. The
playground is big. I often do morning exercises there.
I am in Class 1, Grade 7. My favourite subjects are
Chinese, Maths and English. They are interesting. I like
drawing because it is fun. I don't like playing basketball
because I am not tall.
I like my school very much and I am happy at my
school.
解析
【分析】本题是英语应用文写作题，要求以七年级学生Mike的身份介绍自己和学校。解题思路：首先明确需包含表格中所有要点：学校的20间教室、音乐室、电脑室、图书馆、操场；自己的班级（七年级1班）、喜欢的科目及原因、不喜欢的活动及原因，还有对学校的感受。接着按“学校→个人→感受”的逻辑组织内容，补充合理细节（如去图书馆借书、在操场做早操），确保语句通顺，词数符合要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】写作时，先承接开头介绍学校：说明学校的设施情况，补充自己在学校的日常活动（如去图书馆借书、在操场做早操）；再介绍自己的班级、喜好的科目及原因，喜欢的活动（如画画）及原因，不喜欢的活动（如打篮球）及原因；最后表达对学校的喜爱和开心的心情，确保所有要点都覆盖，语言连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
My name is Mike. I am thirteen years old. I study in Sunshine Middle School. It is big. There are 20 classrooms in it. And it has a music room and a computer room. There is a library too. I often go there to borrow books. The playground is big. I often do morning exercises there.
I am in Class 1, Grade 7. My favourite subjects are Chinese, Maths and English. They are interesting. I like drawing because it is fun. I don't like playing basketball because I am not tall.
I like my school very much and I am happy at my school.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，校园话题表达
【点评】本题考查学生运用英语介绍校园生活与个人情况的能力，需准确整合给定信息，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作的基本要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时，先承接开头介绍学校：说明学校的设施情况，补充自己在学校的日常活动（如去图书馆借书、在操场做早操）；再介绍自己的班级、喜好的科目及原因，喜欢的活动（如画画）及原因，不喜欢的活动（如打篮球）及原因；最后表达对学校的喜爱和开心的心情，确保所有要点都覆盖，语言连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
My name is Mike. I am thirteen years old. I study in Sunshine Middle School. It is big. There are 20 classrooms in it. And it has a music room and a computer room. There is a library too. I often go there to borrow books. The playground is big. I often do morning exercises there.
I am in Class 1, Grade 7. My favourite subjects are Chinese, Maths and English. They are interesting. I like drawing because it is fun. I don't like playing basketball because I am not tall.
I like my school very much and I am happy at my school.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，校园话题表达
【点评】本题考查学生运用英语介绍校园生活与个人情况的能力，需准确整合给定信息，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作的基本要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
