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五、书面表达
假如你是李华，你校于3月12日开展了一场探索校园植物的活动。你的笔友Mike对此很感兴趣，并发邮件向你询问具体的活动细节。请你结合以下提示写一封回信，谈谈活动过程及你的收获。
注意:1.词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Mike,
I'm glad that you are interested in the "Exploring Plants on Campus" activity at our school.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你校于3月12日开展了一场探索校园植物的活动。你的笔友Mike对此很感兴趣，并发邮件向你询问具体的活动细节。请你结合以下提示写一封回信，谈谈活动过程及你的收获。
注意:1.词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Mike,
I'm glad that you are interested in the "Exploring Plants on Campus" activity at our school.
I can't wait to share something about it with you.
Firstly, we took an exciting tour around the schoolyard to learn about plants at school.
Then,a teacher gave us an interesting speech about different kinds of plants in the world.
He used simple stories to make the speech easy to understand. Finally, we attended the plant exhibition in our school hall, which was really cool.
This activity was meaningful. It made me realise how wonderful nature is and how important it is to protect nature.
I hope you can join in such a fun activity in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm glad that you are interested in the "Exploring Plants on Campus" activity at our school. I can't wait to share something about it with you.
Firstly, we took an exciting tour around the schoolyard to learn about plants at school. Then,a teacher gave us an interesting speech about different kinds of plants in the world. He used simple stories to make the speech easy to understand. Finally, we attended the plant exhibition in our school hall, which was really cool.
This activity was meaningful. It made me realise how wonderful nature is and how important it is to protect nature. I hope you can join in such a fun activity in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I'm glad that you are interested in the "Exploring Plants on Campus" activity at our school. I can't wait to share something about it with you.
Firstly, we took an exciting tour around the schoolyard to learn about plants at school. Then,a teacher gave us an interesting speech about different kinds of plants in the world. He used simple stories to make the speech easy to understand. Finally, we attended the plant exhibition in our school hall, which was really cool.
This activity was meaningful. It made me realise how wonderful nature is and how important it is to protect nature. I hope you can join in such a fun activity in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语话题书信写作题，要求以李华的身份给笔友Mike回信，介绍学校“探索校园植物”活动的细节。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，引出分享活动的内容；2. 结合题目给出的三个活动（了解校园植物、听植物种类演讲、参加植物展览）按顺序描述活动过程，适当添加细节让内容连贯；3. 最后阐述活动收获，表达对自然的感悟，满足词数要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头引出分享活动，接着按顺序描述活动：先游览校园了解植物，再听老师用简单故事讲解不同种类植物的演讲，最后参加学校大厅的植物展览；然后点明活动意义，写出对自然的感悟，最后邀请对方参与类似活动，确保内容连贯、符合书信格式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm glad that you are interested in the "Exploring Plants on Campus" activity at our school. I can't wait to share something about it with you.
Firstly, we took an exciting tour around the schoolyard to learn about plants at school. Then,a teacher gave us an interesting speech about different kinds of plants in the world. He used simple stories to make the speech easy to understand. Finally, we attended the plant exhibition in our school hall, which was really cool.
This activity was meaningful. It made me realise how wonderful nature is and how important it is to protect nature. I hope you can join in such a fun activity in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题作文、内容连贯表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，结合给定的三个活动展开，添加了合理细节使内容充实，情感表达真实自然，符合书信格式和词数要求，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题是英语话题书信写作题，要求以李华的身份给笔友Mike回信，介绍学校“探索校园植物”活动的细节。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，引出分享活动的内容；2. 结合题目给出的三个活动（了解校园植物、听植物种类演讲、参加植物展览）按顺序描述活动过程，适当添加细节让内容连贯；3. 最后阐述活动收获，表达对自然的感悟，满足词数要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头引出分享活动，接着按顺序描述活动：先游览校园了解植物，再听老师用简单故事讲解不同种类植物的演讲，最后参加学校大厅的植物展览；然后点明活动意义，写出对自然的感悟，最后邀请对方参与类似活动，确保内容连贯、符合书信格式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm glad that you are interested in the "Exploring Plants on Campus" activity at our school. I can't wait to share something about it with you.
Firstly, we took an exciting tour around the schoolyard to learn about plants at school. Then,a teacher gave us an interesting speech about different kinds of plants in the world. He used simple stories to make the speech easy to understand. Finally, we attended the plant exhibition in our school hall, which was really cool.
This activity was meaningful. It made me realise how wonderful nature is and how important it is to protect nature. I hope you can join in such a fun activity in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题作文、内容连贯表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，结合给定的三个活动展开，添加了合理细节使内容充实，情感表达真实自然，符合书信格式和词数要求，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.4
