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请你根据表格中的提示内容，写一篇英语短文介绍巴勃罗·毕加索(Pablo Picasso)。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:说明文;② 时态:一般现在时和一般过去时;③ 人称:以第三人称为主;④ 写作时先引入主题,再详细介绍毕加索的生平,最后表达个人观点和理解。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
请你根据表格中的提示内容，写一篇英语短文介绍巴勃罗·毕加索(Pablo Picasso)。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:说明文;② 时态:一般现在时和一般过去时;③ 人称:以第三人称为主;④ 写作时先引入主题,再详细介绍毕加索的生平,最后表达个人观点和理解。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881.
He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great intelligence in drawing.
He produced his first oil paintings when he was thirteen. He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life.
I think Pablo Picasso is a great person.
We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great intelligence in drawing. He produced his first oil paintings when he was thirteen. He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life.
I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great intelligence in drawing. He produced his first oil paintings when he was thirteen. He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life.
I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作要求：体裁为人物说明文，时态结合一般过去时（介绍生平）和一般现在时（表达观点），人称以第三人称为主。写作思路分三步：1. 引入主题：通过“阅读百科了解毕加索”自然引出介绍对象；2. 详细介绍毕加索核心生平信息：国籍、职业、出生时间、童年绘画兴趣、父亲的引导、早期创作、一生艺术成就；3. 表达个人观点：赞扬毕加索的伟大，点明学习他追梦的意义，符合题目结构要求。
【解析】
按照写作步骤完成：
1. 开头引入：用“I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.”引出介绍对象，符合要求；
2. 生平介绍：依次说明毕加索是西班牙著名画家和雕塑家，出生于1881年10月25日，童年热爱绘画，父亲的帮助让他展现绘画天赋，13岁创作第一幅油画，一生创作大量优秀艺术作品，时态用一般过去时，符合要求；
3. 个人观点：用“I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.”表达评价，结构完整，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great intelligence in drawing. He produced his first oil paintings when he was thirteen. He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life.
I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
【知识点】
英语人物说明文写作、时态运用、英语作文结构布局
【点评】
范文严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰（引入-生平-观点），时态使用准确，内容涵盖毕加索关键信息，语言简洁流畅，是符合要求的优秀人物介绍短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作要求：体裁为人物说明文，时态结合一般过去时（介绍生平）和一般现在时（表达观点），人称以第三人称为主。写作思路分三步：1. 引入主题：通过“阅读百科了解毕加索”自然引出介绍对象；2. 详细介绍毕加索核心生平信息：国籍、职业、出生时间、童年绘画兴趣、父亲的引导、早期创作、一生艺术成就；3. 表达个人观点：赞扬毕加索的伟大，点明学习他追梦的意义，符合题目结构要求。
【解析】
按照写作步骤完成：
1. 开头引入：用“I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.”引出介绍对象，符合要求；
2. 生平介绍：依次说明毕加索是西班牙著名画家和雕塑家，出生于1881年10月25日，童年热爱绘画，父亲的帮助让他展现绘画天赋，13岁创作第一幅油画，一生创作大量优秀艺术作品，时态用一般过去时，符合要求；
3. 个人观点：用“I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.”表达评价，结构完整，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great intelligence in drawing. He produced his first oil paintings when he was thirteen. He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life.
I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
【知识点】
英语人物说明文写作、时态运用、英语作文结构布局
【点评】
范文严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰（引入-生平-观点），时态使用准确，内容涵盖毕加索关键信息，语言简洁流畅，是符合要求的优秀人物介绍短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
