经典例题
请根据以下要点提示，以“My Favourite Outdoor Activity”为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文。
【要点】1. What outdoor activity do you like?
2. Why do you like the outdoor activity?
3. Write about one of your experiences of doing the outdoor activity.
My Favourite Outdoor Activity

My Favourite Outdoor Activity
We all know outdoor activities can make us healthy. I usually do outdoor activities，such as swimming，hiking and riding. But My favourite outdoor activity is camping.
It's very cheap and it's good for my health. I can stay outside and enjoy the beautiful lakes and hills.
Once，I went camping by the sea. The sunrise was so beautiful. I enjoyed nice food and drinks. The camping really brought me a lot of fun.
If I am free this weekend，I will invite my good friends to go camping with me.

【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确题干给出的三个硬性写作要求，第一步先回应第一个问题，直接点明自己最喜欢的户外活动是什么，可以先铺垫自己日常参与的其他户外活动，再突出核心喜好，开门见山。第二步回应第二个问题，从活动的优势、给自己带来的益处等角度说明喜欢该活动的原因，内容贴合实际即可。第三步回应第三个问题，选取一次印象深刻的相关经历，补充具体细节让内容更生动，最后可以适当加一句后续的相关计划收尾，保证文章结构完整，字数满足不少于60词的要求，同时注意不同语境下的时态正确使用即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：先总述户外活动对人的益处，列举自己常参与的游泳、远足、骑行等户外活动，直接点明自己最喜爱的户外活动是露营，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 阐释喜好原因：从露营成本低、有益健康、能亲近自然欣赏湖光山色的角度说明自己喜爱露营的理由，完成第二个要点的表述。
3. 叙述具体经历：选取一次去海边露营的过往经历，描写观赏绝美日出、享用美食饮品的细节，点明露营给自己带来很多乐趣，完成第三个要点的表述。
4. 收尾补充：说明自己有空的时候会邀请好友一同露营，让全文逻辑连贯结构完整，不同场景对应正确的时态，语法使用准确，字数符合要求。
【答案】
My Favourite Outdoor Activity
We all know outdoor activities can make us healthy. I usually do outdoor activities，such as swimming，hiking and riding. But My favourite outdoor activity is camping.
It's very cheap and it's good for my health. I can stay outside and enjoy the beautiful lakes and hills.
Once，I went camping by the sea. The sunrise was so beautiful. I enjoyed nice food and drinks. The camping really brought me a lot of fun.
If I am free this weekend，I will invite my good friends to go camping with me.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，时态灵活运用，要点全覆盖
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有指定写作要点，行文逻辑流畅自然，从点明喜好到阐述原因再到分享具体经历层层递进，时态使用准确无误，内容细节饱满，远超出60词的字数要求，是一篇符合初中英语写作要求的优秀参考范文，也为同类爱好类话题写作提供了清晰的思路参考。
【难度系数】
0.7