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五、书面表达。
随着科技的发展,未来人们的生活会发生很大的变化。请你根据所学知识,发挥想象,以 "Life in the Future" 为题,用英语写一篇关于未来人们生活的短文。
写作提示:
1. What will transportation be like?
2. What will it be like living in a smart home?
3. How will things change at work?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
Life in the Future
With the development of technology, life in the future will be quite different. I'd like to share my thoughts about these changes.
随着科技的发展,未来人们的生活会发生很大的变化。请你根据所学知识,发挥想象,以 "Life in the Future" 为题,用英语写一篇关于未来人们生活的短文。
写作提示:
1. What will transportation be like?
2. What will it be like living in a smart home?
3. How will things change at work?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
Life in the Future
With the development of technology, life in the future will be quite different. I'd like to share my thoughts about these changes.
Transportation will become more convenient and faster. Flying cars and high-speed trains will make long distance travel faster. Smart homes will be common. For example, smartphones and smart-watches will control everything at home. Robots will play an important role in our lives. They may help with boring and dangerous work. People will have more free time to enjoy life.
I believe all of these can come true, and our life will become better and better in the future.
I believe all of these can come true, and our life will become better and better in the future.
答案
五、 Life in the Future
With the development of technology, life in the future will be quite different. I'd like to share my thoughts about these changes.
Transportation will become more convenient and faster. Flying cars and high-speed trains will make long distance travel faster. Smart homes will be common. For example, smartphones and smart-watches will control everything at home. Robots will play an important role in our lives. They may help with boring and dangerous work. People will have more free time to enjoy life.
I believe all of these can come true, and our life will become better and better in the future.
With the development of technology, life in the future will be quite different. I'd like to share my thoughts about these changes.
Transportation will become more convenient and faster. Flying cars and high-speed trains will make long distance travel faster. Smart homes will be common. For example, smartphones and smart-watches will control everything at home. Robots will play an important role in our lives. They may help with boring and dangerous work. People will have more free time to enjoy life.
I believe all of these can come true, and our life will become better and better in the future.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：主题是未来生活，必须覆盖题干给出的三个提示要点：未来的交通形态、智能家居的居住体验、工作场景的变化，同时要衔接好题目已经给出的开头，控制总词数在70左右，不能出现真实人名校名。接下来可以顺着逻辑依次对应要点展开：首先写交通的变化，点明未来出行更便捷快速；接着写智能家居的特点，说明智能设备可以管控家中设施，居住更省心；之后写工作上的改变，说明机器人可以分担枯燥危险的工作，人们有更多空闲时间，最后加一句简短的对未来的展望收尾，就能完成符合要求的短文。
【解析】
1. 衔接给定开头后，首先对应第一个写作提示，介绍未来交通的特点：点明交通会更便捷高速，举例飞行汽车、高铁让长途旅行耗时更短，完成第一个要点的书写。
2. 接着对应第二个写作提示，介绍智能家居的情况：说明智能家居会普及，用智能手机、智能手表就能管控家中所有设备，居住体验更舒适，完成第二个要点的书写。
3. 之后对应第三个写作提示，介绍工作场景的变化：说明机器人会承担大部分枯燥、危险的工作，人们能拥有更多自由时间享受生活，完成第三个要点的书写。
4. 最后补充一句对未来的正向展望收尾，行文全部使用一般将来时贴合主题，保证语句通顺无语法错误，词数符合题干要求。
【答案】
Life in the Future
With the development of technology, life in the future will be quite different. I'd like to share my thoughts about these changes.
Transportation will become more convenient and faster. Flying cars and high-speed trains will make long distance travel faster. Smart homes will be common. For example, smartphones and smart-watches will control everything at home. Robots will play an important role in our lives. They may help with boring and dangerous work. People will have more free time to enjoy life.
I believe all of these can come true, and our life will become better and better in the future.
【知识点】
一般将来时，英语话题写作，要点式作文
【点评】
本篇参考范文严格覆盖了题干全部三个写作提示要点，行文逻辑清晰，按照交通、居家生活、工作的顺序依次展开想象，最后补充合理的正向展望，衔接自然流畅，所用词汇和句式都符合初中阶段的英语表达要求，没有语法错误，词数符合题干70词左右的要求，学生写作时可以参考该分层对应要点的思路，避免遗漏得分点，适当补充细节即可完成合格的作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：主题是未来生活，必须覆盖题干给出的三个提示要点：未来的交通形态、智能家居的居住体验、工作场景的变化，同时要衔接好题目已经给出的开头，控制总词数在70左右，不能出现真实人名校名。接下来可以顺着逻辑依次对应要点展开：首先写交通的变化，点明未来出行更便捷快速；接着写智能家居的特点，说明智能设备可以管控家中设施，居住更省心；之后写工作上的改变，说明机器人可以分担枯燥危险的工作，人们有更多空闲时间，最后加一句简短的对未来的展望收尾，就能完成符合要求的短文。
【解析】
1. 衔接给定开头后，首先对应第一个写作提示，介绍未来交通的特点：点明交通会更便捷高速，举例飞行汽车、高铁让长途旅行耗时更短，完成第一个要点的书写。
2. 接着对应第二个写作提示，介绍智能家居的情况：说明智能家居会普及，用智能手机、智能手表就能管控家中所有设备，居住体验更舒适，完成第二个要点的书写。
3. 之后对应第三个写作提示，介绍工作场景的变化：说明机器人会承担大部分枯燥、危险的工作，人们能拥有更多自由时间享受生活，完成第三个要点的书写。
4. 最后补充一句对未来的正向展望收尾，行文全部使用一般将来时贴合主题，保证语句通顺无语法错误，词数符合题干要求。
【答案】
Life in the Future
With the development of technology, life in the future will be quite different. I'd like to share my thoughts about these changes.
Transportation will become more convenient and faster. Flying cars and high-speed trains will make long distance travel faster. Smart homes will be common. For example, smartphones and smart-watches will control everything at home. Robots will play an important role in our lives. They may help with boring and dangerous work. People will have more free time to enjoy life.
I believe all of these can come true, and our life will become better and better in the future.
【知识点】
一般将来时，英语话题写作，要点式作文
【点评】
本篇参考范文严格覆盖了题干全部三个写作提示要点，行文逻辑清晰，按照交通、居家生活、工作的顺序依次展开想象，最后补充合理的正向展望，衔接自然流畅，所用词汇和句式都符合初中阶段的英语表达要求，没有语法错误，词数符合题干70词左右的要求，学生写作时可以参考该分层对应要点的思路，避免遗漏得分点，适当补充细节即可完成合格的作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
