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七、书面表达。（23分）
假设某中学生英文报正开展关于“计算机与学生生活”的征文活动，请你根据下表中所提示的要点，以“The computer in my life”为题，用英语为该报写一篇短文，简述计算机在你生活中的用途，并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受。
注意:1. 短文必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译;
2. 80词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
The computer in my life
The computer has become an important part of my life.
假设某中学生英文报正开展关于“计算机与学生生活”的征文活动，请你根据下表中所提示的要点，以“The computer in my life”为题，用英语为该报写一篇短文，简述计算机在你生活中的用途，并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受。
注意:1. 短文必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译;
2. 80词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
The computer in my life
The computer has become an important part of my life.
With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have problems in my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the internet. When I feel stressed, I can listen to some music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online.
But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the internet. This makes me become lazy. In addition, too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.
答案
One possible version:
The computer in my life
The computer has become an important part of my life. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have problems in my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the internet. When I feel stressed, I can listen to some music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online.
But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the internet. This makes me become lazy. In addition, too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.
The computer in my life
The computer has become an important part of my life. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have problems in my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the internet. When I feel stressed, I can listen to some music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online.
But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the internet. This makes me become lazy. In addition, too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“计算机在学生生活中的用途及影响”写作。解题思路：1. 明确需包含的要点：表格中学习（搜集资料、拓展阅读）、交流（传递信息、探讨问题）、娱乐（欣赏音乐、购物）等用途，以及计算机对生活的影响（感受）；2. 结构安排：先承接给定开头，分述计算机的用途，再阐述负面影响，最后提出合理使用的建议；3. 注意要求：适当发挥，避免生硬翻译，控制字数约80词，不提及真实信息。
【解析】写作时，先承接开头“The computer has become an important part of my life.”，依次说明计算机的用途：学习上用电脑搜索有用信息、阅读各类书籍；交流上通过邮件和朋友沟通、和同学在网上讨论学习问题；娱乐上听音乐放松、网购。接着谈感受：过度依赖电脑找作业答案会变懒，长时间用电脑对眼睛不好，因此要合理使用计算机。
【答案】One possible version:
The computer in my life
The computer has become an important part of my life. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have problems in my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the internet. When I feel stressed, I can listen to some music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online.
But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the internet. This makes me become lazy. In addition, too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】本题结合学生生活实际，考查英语语言运用能力，要求涵盖给定要点并适当拓展，引导学生辩证看待计算机的使用，符合中学生的认知水平。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时，先承接开头“The computer has become an important part of my life.”，依次说明计算机的用途：学习上用电脑搜索有用信息、阅读各类书籍；交流上通过邮件和朋友沟通、和同学在网上讨论学习问题；娱乐上听音乐放松、网购。接着谈感受：过度依赖电脑找作业答案会变懒，长时间用电脑对眼睛不好，因此要合理使用计算机。
【答案】One possible version:
The computer in my life
The computer has become an important part of my life. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have problems in my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the internet. When I feel stressed, I can listen to some music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online.
But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the internet. This makes me become lazy. In addition, too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】本题结合学生生活实际，考查英语语言运用能力，要求涵盖给定要点并适当拓展，引导学生辩证看待计算机的使用，符合中学生的认知水平。
【难度系数】0.5
