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假定你是李华,你所在的城市于昨天中午发生了地震,几位同学正在讲述他们的经历。请根据下面的提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文,在今天的英语课上向大家简要介绍地震情况并叙述地震发生时几位同学正在做的事情。
①Kate: do homework, look for her little brother;
②Andy: a noon break, bed, shake摇晃, get out;
③Bob: play basketball, stop, safe place;
④Lisa: shop, things fall down, run out
思路点拨
1. 人称:第三人称为主
2. 时态:一般过去时和过去进行时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①做家务
②作准备
③在那时
④使减速
⑤一……就……
⑥在台风期间
⑦警报器等发出响声
⑧突然;猛地
⑨到……的时候
⑩上气不接下气
⑪因此
2. 句型仿写
①... when we got home later, we found water everywhere.教材p.44 3a
句型:when引导的时间状语从句
仿写:事件发生时,凯特正在做作业。
② It was raining hard while we were driving back.教材p.44 3a
句型:while引导的时间状语从句
仿写:莉萨正在超市购物时,发现货架上的所有东西都掉了下来。
连句成篇
假定你是李华,你所在的城市于昨天中午发生了地震,几位同学正在讲述他们的经历。请根据下面的提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文,在今天的英语课上向大家简要介绍地震情况并叙述地震发生时几位同学正在做的事情。
①Kate: do homework, look for her little brother;
②Andy: a noon break, bed, shake摇晃, get out;
③Bob: play basketball, stop, safe place;
④Lisa: shop, things fall down, run out
思路点拨
1. 人称:第三人称为主
2. 时态:一般过去时和过去进行时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①做家务
②作准备
③在那时
④使减速
⑤一……就……
⑥在台风期间
⑦警报器等发出响声
⑧突然;猛地
⑨到……的时候
⑩上气不接下气
⑪因此
2. 句型仿写
①... when we got home later, we found water everywhere.教材p.44 3a
句型:when引导的时间状语从句
仿写:事件发生时,凯特正在做作业。
② It was raining hard while we were driving back.教材p.44 3a
句型:while引导的时间状语从句
仿写:莉萨正在超市购物时,发现货架上的所有东西都掉了下来。
连句成篇
答案
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①do chores ②make preparations
③at that time ④slow down
⑤as soon as ⑥during the typhoon
⑦go off ⑧all of a sudden
⑨by the time ⑩out of breath
⑪as a result
2. 句型仿写
①When it happened, Kate was doing her homework.
②While Lisa was shopping in a supermarket, she found everything falling down from the shelves.
【连句成篇】
Yesterday a big earthquake hit our city.
The earthquake caused much damage to our city and many tall buildings were badly destroyed.
When it happened, Kate was doing her homework. Then she went to look for her little brother everywhere. Luckily, she found him at last. Andy was having a noon break on his bed. All of a sudden, he felt the house was shaking, so he got out quickly.
Bob was playing basketball at that time. So he stopped at once and ran to a safe place.
While Lisa was shopping in a supermarket, she found everything falling down from the shelves. She ran out of the supermarket right away.
What an unusual experience we had!
1. 主题词块
①do chores ②make preparations
③at that time ④slow down
⑤as soon as ⑥during the typhoon
⑦go off ⑧all of a sudden
⑨by the time ⑩out of breath
⑪as a result
2. 句型仿写
①When it happened, Kate was doing her homework.
②While Lisa was shopping in a supermarket, she found everything falling down from the shelves.
【连句成篇】
Yesterday a big earthquake hit our city.
The earthquake caused much damage to our city and many tall buildings were badly destroyed.
When it happened, Kate was doing her homework. Then she went to look for her little brother everywhere. Luckily, she found him at last. Andy was having a noon break on his bed. All of a sudden, he felt the house was shaking, so he got out quickly.
Bob was playing basketball at that time. So he stopped at once and ran to a safe place.
While Lisa was shopping in a supermarket, she found everything falling down from the shelves. She ran out of the supermarket right away.
What an unusual experience we had!
解析
【分析】
本题是英语记叙文写作题，需根据给定的地震场景、人物经历及思维导图结构完成短文。解题思路为：1. 明确写作要求：人称以第三人称为主，时态用一般过去时（叙述地震事件）和过去进行时（描述地震发生时的动作），字数约100词；2. 遵循思维导图结构：开头点题（介绍地震带来的灾难），主体部分依次叙述Kate、Andy、Bob、Lisa地震时的具体行为，结尾表达个人感受；3. 运用给定的主题词块和句型，确保语句通顺、语法正确，符合写作规范。
【解析】
1. 审题定框架：根据思维导图，短文分为三部分：开头点题（说明昨天中午城市发生地震及灾难）、主体（分别描述四位同学地震时的活动）、结尾（表达对经历的感受）；2. 确定时态：地震发生是过去的事，用一般过去时；描述地震时正在做的动作用过去进行时，搭配when/while引导时间状语从句；3. 填充内容：将四位同学的经历对应到主体部分，运用积累的词块（如all of a sudden等），确保每个同学的经历清晰，语句连贯；4. 结尾升华：用一句话表达对这次地震经历的感受，收束全文。
【答案】
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①do chores ②make preparations
③at that time ④slow down
⑤as soon as ⑥during the typhoon
⑦go off ⑧all of a sudden
⑨by the time ⑩out of breath
⑪as a result
2. 句型仿写
①When it happened, Kate was doing her homework.
②While Lisa was shopping in a supermarket, she found everything falling down from the shelves.
【连句成篇】
Yesterday a big earthquake hit our city.
The earthquake caused much damage to our city and many tall buildings were badly destroyed.
When it happened, Kate was doing her homework. Then she went to look for her little brother everywhere. Luckily, she found him at last. Andy was having a noon break on his bed. All of a sudden, he felt the house was shaking, so he got out quickly.
Bob was playing basketball at that time. So he stopped at once and ran to a safe place.
While Lisa was shopping in a supermarket, she found everything falling down from the shelves. She ran out of the supermarket right away.
What an unusual experience we had!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，过去进行时，时间状语从句
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求和思维导图结构，开头点题明确，主体部分清晰描述了四位同学地震时的经历，正确运用了过去进行时和when/while引导的时间状语从句，语言通顺，符合英语写作规范，是一篇合格的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语记叙文写作题，需根据给定的地震场景、人物经历及思维导图结构完成短文。解题思路为：1. 明确写作要求：人称以第三人称为主，时态用一般过去时（叙述地震事件）和过去进行时（描述地震发生时的动作），字数约100词；2. 遵循思维导图结构：开头点题（介绍地震带来的灾难），主体部分依次叙述Kate、Andy、Bob、Lisa地震时的具体行为，结尾表达个人感受；3. 运用给定的主题词块和句型，确保语句通顺、语法正确，符合写作规范。
【解析】
1. 审题定框架：根据思维导图，短文分为三部分：开头点题（说明昨天中午城市发生地震及灾难）、主体（分别描述四位同学地震时的活动）、结尾（表达对经历的感受）；2. 确定时态：地震发生是过去的事，用一般过去时；描述地震时正在做的动作用过去进行时，搭配when/while引导时间状语从句；3. 填充内容：将四位同学的经历对应到主体部分，运用积累的词块（如all of a sudden等），确保每个同学的经历清晰，语句连贯；4. 结尾升华：用一句话表达对这次地震经历的感受，收束全文。
【答案】
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①do chores ②make preparations
③at that time ④slow down
⑤as soon as ⑥during the typhoon
⑦go off ⑧all of a sudden
⑨by the time ⑩out of breath
⑪as a result
2. 句型仿写
①When it happened, Kate was doing her homework.
②While Lisa was shopping in a supermarket, she found everything falling down from the shelves.
【连句成篇】
Yesterday a big earthquake hit our city.
The earthquake caused much damage to our city and many tall buildings were badly destroyed.
When it happened, Kate was doing her homework. Then she went to look for her little brother everywhere. Luckily, she found him at last. Andy was having a noon break on his bed. All of a sudden, he felt the house was shaking, so he got out quickly.
Bob was playing basketball at that time. So he stopped at once and ran to a safe place.
While Lisa was shopping in a supermarket, she found everything falling down from the shelves. She ran out of the supermarket right away.
What an unusual experience we had!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，过去进行时，时间状语从句
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求和思维导图结构，开头点题明确，主体部分清晰描述了四位同学地震时的经历，正确运用了过去进行时和when/while引导的时间状语从句，语言通顺，符合英语写作规范，是一篇合格的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
