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素材积累＞＞
[开头句]
1. Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. （开篇点题）
2. I'm so sorry to hear that you're having trouble with a school bully. （开篇点题）
[中间句]
1. I hardly have any spare time for my hobbies like volleyball and music. （问题困惑）
2. You seem to be having trouble with your schoolwork. （问题困惑）
3. Why not try some breathing exercises? （解决方式）
[结尾句]
1. I hope my answer is valuable to you. （关心祝福）
2. Let me know if I can help in any way. （关心祝福）
3. I'm always here for you. （关心祝福）
[名言警句]
1. Hard work can overcome all difficulties. 勤劳可以战胜一切困难。
2. A problem is a chance for you to do your best. 一个问题是让你尽全力的一次机会。
写作演练＞＞
假设你是刘老师，你的学生王圆现在遇到了困难，他写信给你，希望你给他提供一些建议。请你根据下表中的信息给他写一封90词左右的回信。
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁:应用文;2. 时态:一般现在时;3. 人称:以第二人称为主;4. 首先描述问题,然后提出建议来解决问题,最后表达自己的希望。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
[开头句]
1. Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. （开篇点题）
2. I'm so sorry to hear that you're having trouble with a school bully. （开篇点题）
[中间句]
1. I hardly have any spare time for my hobbies like volleyball and music. （问题困惑）
2. You seem to be having trouble with your schoolwork. （问题困惑）
3. Why not try some breathing exercises? （解决方式）
[结尾句]
1. I hope my answer is valuable to you. （关心祝福）
2. Let me know if I can help in any way. （关心祝福）
3. I'm always here for you. （关心祝福）
[名言警句]
1. Hard work can overcome all difficulties. 勤劳可以战胜一切困难。
2. A problem is a chance for you to do your best. 一个问题是让你尽全力的一次机会。
写作演练＞＞
假设你是刘老师，你的学生王圆现在遇到了困难，他写信给你，希望你给他提供一些建议。请你根据下表中的信息给他写一封90词左右的回信。
[思路点拨]
1. 体裁:应用文;2. 时态:一般现在时;3. 人称:以第二人称为主;4. 首先描述问题,然后提出建议来解决问题,最后表达自己的希望。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案
One possible version:
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文书信写作题，解题思路如下：1. 明确写作要素：身份为刘老师，体裁是书信，时态用一般现在时，以第二人称为主；2. 梳理学生王圆的问题（学业与爱好难平衡、父母严格致压力大、体重问题），结合素材中的建议类表达（如时间分配、沟通、饮食运动调整）；3. 遵循写作结构：开头问候感谢来信→中间对应问题给出具体建议→结尾表达希望与祝福，控制词数90左右。
【解析】
按照书信规范格式，开头采用素材中的“Thank you very much for your letter”开篇；中间对应王圆的三个问题给出合理建议：①针对学业与爱好难平衡，建议根据空余时间选择爱好；②针对父母严格致压力大，建议和父母沟通压力，合理安排作业；③针对体重问题，建议少吃零食多运动；结尾使用素材中的关心祝福句“I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking. Best wishes”，符合题目要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时运用、建议类表达
【点评】
该写作紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，对应学生的实际问题给出了具体可行的建议，语言符合书信格式，结合素材内容，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文书信写作题，解题思路如下：1. 明确写作要素：身份为刘老师，体裁是书信，时态用一般现在时，以第二人称为主；2. 梳理学生王圆的问题（学业与爱好难平衡、父母严格致压力大、体重问题），结合素材中的建议类表达（如时间分配、沟通、饮食运动调整）；3. 遵循写作结构：开头问候感谢来信→中间对应问题给出具体建议→结尾表达希望与祝福，控制词数90左右。
【解析】
按照书信规范格式，开头采用素材中的“Thank you very much for your letter”开篇；中间对应王圆的三个问题给出合理建议：①针对学业与爱好难平衡，建议根据空余时间选择爱好；②针对父母严格致压力大，建议和父母沟通压力，合理安排作业；③针对体重问题，建议少吃零食多运动；结尾使用素材中的关心祝福句“I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking. Best wishes”，符合题目要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时运用、建议类表达
【点评】
该写作紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，对应学生的实际问题给出了具体可行的建议，语言符合书信格式，结合素材内容，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
