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写作指导
1. 写作任务
动物是人类的朋友，我们应该善待动物，与动物和谐相处。凶猛矫健的东北虎，憨态可掬的大熊猫，活泼可爱的宠物狗……每一种动物都对生态系统至关重要。生物多样性是人类赖以生存的条件，是社会经济可持续发展的基础，是生态安全的重要保障。
假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，以“My Favourite Animal”为题，写一篇英语短文，向校报英文专栏投稿。
提示：(1)你最喜欢什么动物？
(2)介绍它的特征和生活习性。
(3)你喜欢它的理由。
要求：(1)词数不少于80个。
(2)参考词汇仅供参考。
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
2. 思路点拨
第一步：审题
体裁：
人称：
时态：
第二步：列提纲
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1) As we all know, there are many animals around us.
众所周知，我们周围有很多种动物。
(2) Of , I like pandas best.
在所有的动物中，我最喜欢大熊猫。
中间句：
(1) They have round faces, and fat bodies.
它们有圆圆的脸，又大又黑的眼睛和胖胖的身体。
(2) Pandas like bamboo.
大熊猫喜欢吃竹子。
(3) They half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping.
一天中它们用一半的时间来吃饭，其余的大部分时间用来睡觉。
(4) They people.
它们对人很友好。
(5) When I go to the zoo, I always them first.
当我去动物园的时候，我总是先看看它们。
结尾句：
Now I them again.
现在我迫不及待地想再见到它们。
名言名句：
(1) Animals are man's close friends.
动物是人类亲密的朋友。
(2) The same sky, the same home.
同一片天空，同一个家园。
3. 范文品鉴
My Favourite Animal
As we all know, there are many kinds of animals around us. Some are cute. Some are scary. But they are all our good friends. Of all the animals, I like pandas best. (引入话题)
Pandas are black and white. They have round faces, big black eyes and fat bodies. They are one of the most lovely animals in the world. They mainly live in China's Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu Provinces. Pandas like eating bamboo. They spend half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping. (基本情况)
Pandas are big and lovely. They are friendly to people. When I go to the zoo, I always look at them first. Now I can't wait to see them again. (期待)
1. 写作任务
动物是人类的朋友，我们应该善待动物，与动物和谐相处。凶猛矫健的东北虎，憨态可掬的大熊猫，活泼可爱的宠物狗……每一种动物都对生态系统至关重要。生物多样性是人类赖以生存的条件，是社会经济可持续发展的基础，是生态安全的重要保障。
假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，以“My Favourite Animal”为题，写一篇英语短文，向校报英文专栏投稿。
提示：(1)你最喜欢什么动物？
(2)介绍它的特征和生活习性。
(3)你喜欢它的理由。
要求：(1)词数不少于80个。
(2)参考词汇仅供参考。
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
2. 思路点拨
第一步：审题
体裁：
人称：
时态：
第二步：列提纲
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1) As we all know, there are many animals around us.
众所周知，我们周围有很多种动物。
(2) Of , I like pandas best.
在所有的动物中，我最喜欢大熊猫。
中间句：
(1) They have round faces, and fat bodies.
它们有圆圆的脸，又大又黑的眼睛和胖胖的身体。
(2) Pandas like bamboo.
大熊猫喜欢吃竹子。
(3) They half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping.
一天中它们用一半的时间来吃饭，其余的大部分时间用来睡觉。
(4) They people.
它们对人很友好。
(5) When I go to the zoo, I always them first.
当我去动物园的时候，我总是先看看它们。
结尾句：
Now I them again.
现在我迫不及待地想再见到它们。
名言名句：
(1) Animals are man's close friends.
动物是人类亲密的朋友。
(2) The same sky, the same home.
同一片天空，同一个家园。
3. 范文品鉴
My Favourite Animal
As we all know, there are many kinds of animals around us. Some are cute. Some are scary. But they are all our good friends. Of all the animals, I like pandas best. (引入话题)
Pandas are black and white. They have round faces, big black eyes and fat bodies. They are one of the most lovely animals in the world. They mainly live in China's Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu Provinces. Pandas like eating bamboo. They spend half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping. (基本情况)
Pandas are big and lovely. They are friendly to people. When I go to the zoo, I always look at them first. Now I can't wait to see them again. (期待)
答案
2. 思路点拨
第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
第二步：列提纲
引入话题：Of all the animals, I like pandas best.
特征：They are black and white. They have round faces, big black eyes and fat bodies.
生活习性：They like eating bamboo. They spend half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping.
期待：They are lovely and friendly to people. When I go to the zoo, I always look at them first. Now I can't wait to see them again.
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1) As we all know, there are many kinds of animals around us.
(2) Of all the animals, I like pandas best.
中间句：
(1) They have round faces, big black eyes and fat bodies.
(2) Pandas like eating bamboo.
(3) They spend half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping.
(4) They are friendly to people.
(5) When I go to the zoo, I always look at them first.
结尾句：
Now I can't wait to see them again.
3. 范文
My Favourite Animal
As we all know, there are many kinds of animals around us. Some are cute. Some are scary. But they are all our good friends. Of all the animals, I like pandas best.
Pandas are black and white. They have round faces, big black eyes and fat bodies. They are one of the most lovely animals in the world. They mainly live in China's Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu Provinces. Pandas like eating bamboo. They spend half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping.
Pandas are big and lovely. They are friendly to people. When I go to the zoo, I always look at them first. Now I can't wait to see them again.
第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
第二步：列提纲
引入话题：Of all the animals, I like pandas best.
特征：They are black and white. They have round faces, big black eyes and fat bodies.
生活习性：They like eating bamboo. They spend half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping.
期待：They are lovely and friendly to people. When I go to the zoo, I always look at them first. Now I can't wait to see them again.
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1) As we all know, there are many kinds of animals around us.
(2) Of all the animals, I like pandas best.
中间句：
(1) They have round faces, big black eyes and fat bodies.
(2) Pandas like eating bamboo.
(3) They spend half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping.
(4) They are friendly to people.
(5) When I go to the zoo, I always look at them first.
结尾句：
Now I can't wait to see them again.
3. 范文
My Favourite Animal
As we all know, there are many kinds of animals around us. Some are cute. Some are scary. But they are all our good friends. Of all the animals, I like pandas best.
Pandas are black and white. They have round faces, big black eyes and fat bodies. They are one of the most lovely animals in the world. They mainly live in China's Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu Provinces. Pandas like eating bamboo. They spend half of their day eating and most of the rest time sleeping.
Pandas are big and lovely. They are friendly to people. When I go to the zoo, I always look at them first. Now I can't wait to see them again.
