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你校英语社团公众号计划开设一个名为“Inspiring People”的专栏，现向全校学生征稿。请你以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇短文，介绍一位你最敬佩的人，描述他/她的事迹及其品质，并阐述其对你个人产生的积极影响。他/她可以是像何泽慧一样杰出的物理学家，也可以是你身边一位平凡的榜样，如你的老师、家人或朋友等。
写作要求：
1. 人物选择明确，事迹与品质描述清晰，文中须包含他/她对你个人产生的积极影响；
2. 词数80左右。
The Person I Admire Most
你校英语社团公众号计划开设一个名为“Inspiring People”的专栏，现向全校学生征稿。请你以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇短文，介绍一位你最敬佩的人，描述他/她的事迹及其品质，并阐述其对你个人产生的积极影响。他/她可以是像何泽慧一样杰出的物理学家，也可以是你身边一位平凡的榜样，如你的老师、家人或朋友等。
写作要求：
1. 人物选择明确，事迹与品质描述清晰，文中须包含他/她对你个人产生的积极影响；
2. 词数80左右。
The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is my English teacher, Ms Li. She not only teaches us grammar and vocabulary but also makes English class full of fun through interesting games and stories.
I still remember how she patiently helped me when I was struggling with pronunciation, staying after school to practise with me again and again.
Her kindness and professional dedication have taught me what true responsibility means.
Because of her, I am no longer afraid of making mistakes and have found the joy of learning a new language.
She inspires me to become a patient and helpful person like her in the future.
答案
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The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is my English teacher, Ms Li. She not only teaches us grammar and vocabulary but also makes English class full of fun through interesting games and stories. I still remember how she patiently helped me when I was struggling with pronunciation, staying after school to practise with me again and again.
Her kindness and professional dedication have taught me what true responsibility means. Because of her, I am no longer afraid of making mistakes and have found the joy of learning a new language. She inspires me to become a patient and helpful person like her in the future.
The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is my English teacher, Ms Li. She not only teaches us grammar and vocabulary but also makes English class full of fun through interesting games and stories. I still remember how she patiently helped me when I was struggling with pronunciation, staying after school to practise with me again and again.
Her kindness and professional dedication have taught me what true responsibility means. Because of her, I am no longer afraid of making mistakes and have found the joy of learning a new language. She inspires me to become a patient and helpful person like her in the future.
解析
【分析】首先确定敬佩的人物为身边的英语老师Ms Li，符合题目中“平凡榜样”的要求；接着选取具体事迹（耐心帮助练习发音），清晰体现其品质；最后阐述对自己的积极影响，紧扣写作要求，控制词数在80左右，结构清晰。
【解析】写作时需遵循“点明人物→描述事迹→提炼品质→阐述影响”的结构：1. 开篇直接点明最敬佩的人是英语老师Ms Li；2. 用具体事例（课后反复帮练发音）展现她的耐心与专业；3. 提炼她的品质（善良、专业奉献）；4. 说明对自己的影响（不再怕犯错，爱上学英语，立志成为她那样的人），确保词数符合要求。
【答案】The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is my English teacher, Ms Li. She not only teaches us grammar and vocabulary but also makes English class full of fun through interesting games and stories. I still remember how she patiently helped me when I was struggling with pronunciation, staying after school to practise with me again and again.
Her kindness and professional dedication have taught me what true responsibility means. Because of her, I am no longer afraid of making mistakes and have found the joy of learning a new language. She inspires me to become a patient and helpful person like her in the future.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；人物介绍类应用文
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，人物明确，事迹具体，品质与影响清晰，语言流畅，词数符合要求，是一篇优秀的学生习作。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作时需遵循“点明人物→描述事迹→提炼品质→阐述影响”的结构：1. 开篇直接点明最敬佩的人是英语老师Ms Li；2. 用具体事例（课后反复帮练发音）展现她的耐心与专业；3. 提炼她的品质（善良、专业奉献）；4. 说明对自己的影响（不再怕犯错，爱上学英语，立志成为她那样的人），确保词数符合要求。
【答案】The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is my English teacher, Ms Li. She not only teaches us grammar and vocabulary but also makes English class full of fun through interesting games and stories. I still remember how she patiently helped me when I was struggling with pronunciation, staying after school to practise with me again and again.
Her kindness and professional dedication have taught me what true responsibility means. Because of her, I am no longer afraid of making mistakes and have found the joy of learning a new language. She inspires me to become a patient and helpful person like her in the future.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；人物介绍类应用文
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，人物明确，事迹具体，品质与影响清晰，语言流畅，词数符合要求，是一篇优秀的学生习作。
【难度系数】0.7
