Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break.
Yours sincerely,
John
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break.
All the students in our class gave their ideas. Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency. But some students disagree. They doubt whether it can work out as expected by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on them. I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
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Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
But some students disagree. They doubt whether it can work out as expected by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on them.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
But some students disagree. They doubt whether it can work out as expected by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on them.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?
Yours sincerely,
John
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