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1. 写作任务
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友汤姆(Tom)来信询问你在学校的学习情况。请结合下图的内容提示,以“My School Subjects”为题,根据写作要求写一篇不少于60个词的英语短文。
写作要求:(1)短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)Now you my school subjects. 现在让我来告诉你一些我的学校科目的情况。
(2)At school I have many subjects. ... 在学校我有许多科目。它们是……
中间句:
(1)I think it is but . 我认为它难,但有趣。
(2)I'm science, I like the subject very much. 我不擅长科学,但我非常喜欢这门学科。
(3)I don't like maths too boring. 我不喜欢数学,因为它太枯燥了。
(4)My English teacher is . 我的英语老师真的很好。
(5)She the classes interesting. 她努力使课堂变得有趣。
(6)Because I'm numbers. 因为我擅长处理数字。
(7) this subject? 你能帮我学这一科吗?
结尾句:
(1) your favourite subject and ? 你最喜欢的科目是什么? 为什么?
(2) you? Please write to me soon. 你呢? 请尽快给我写信。
名言名句:
(1)A good book is a good friend. 好书如挚友。
(2)It's never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。
3.范文品鉴
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. Now let me tell you something about my school subjects. (引出主题)
I have English,Chinese,maths,history,geography,biology,art,PE,music and IT. (总体介绍)
I like most of the subjects,but my favourite subjects are Chinese and history. I like Chinese because I think it is easy and useful. I think history is interesting. I can learn about the past and learn many interesting stories. I don't like maths or geography because they are boring and too difficult. (具体介绍喜欢和不喜欢的科目及原因)
What do you study? What's your favourite subject and why? (询问对方) Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 写作任务
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友汤姆(Tom)来信询问你在学校的学习情况。请结合下图的内容提示,以“My School Subjects”为题,根据写作要求写一篇不少于60个词的英语短文。
写作要求:(1)短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)Now you my school subjects. 现在让我来告诉你一些我的学校科目的情况。
(2)At school I have many subjects. ... 在学校我有许多科目。它们是……
中间句:
(1)I think it is but . 我认为它难,但有趣。
(2)I'm science, I like the subject very much. 我不擅长科学,但我非常喜欢这门学科。
(3)I don't like maths too boring. 我不喜欢数学,因为它太枯燥了。
(4)My English teacher is . 我的英语老师真的很好。
(5)She the classes interesting. 她努力使课堂变得有趣。
(6)Because I'm numbers. 因为我擅长处理数字。
(7) this subject? 你能帮我学这一科吗?
结尾句:
(1) your favourite subject and ? 你最喜欢的科目是什么? 为什么?
(2) you? Please write to me soon. 你呢? 请尽快给我写信。
名言名句:
(1)A good book is a good friend. 好书如挚友。
(2)It's never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。
3.范文品鉴
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. Now let me tell you something about my school subjects. (引出主题)
I have English,Chinese,maths,history,geography,biology,art,PE,music and IT. (总体介绍)
I like most of the subjects,but my favourite subjects are Chinese and history. I like Chinese because I think it is easy and useful. I think history is interesting. I can learn about the past and learn many interesting stories. I don't like maths or geography because they are boring and too difficult. (具体介绍喜欢和不喜欢的科目及原因)
What do you study? What's your favourite subject and why? (询问对方) Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文（书信）
人称：第一人称（以I为主）
时态：一般现在时
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1) let me tell；something about
(2) They are
中间句：
(1) very difficult；interesting
(2) not good at；but
(3) because it's
(4) really good
(5) tries her best to make
(6) good with
(7) Can you help me with
结尾句：
(1) What's；why
(2) What about
体裁：应用文（书信）
人称：第一人称（以I为主）
时态：一般现在时
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1) let me tell；something about
(2) They are
中间句：
(1) very difficult；interesting
(2) not good at；but
(3) because it's
(4) really good
(5) tries her best to make
(6) good with
(7) Can you help me with
结尾句：
(1) What's；why
(2) What about
解析
本题是人教版七年级上册英语的话题写作训练，主题为向笔友介绍自己的学校学习科目，属于书信类应用文写作。先通过审题明确写作的体裁、人称、时态要求，再补全重点词句积累夯实基础表达，写作时按照「引出主题→总体介绍所有科目→具体说明喜爱/不喜爱的科目及对应原因→向笔友提问收尾」的逻辑展开，保证覆盖全部提示信息、字数达标，不出现真实人名校名即可。
