写作应用
中国农历新年即将到来。值此辞旧迎新之际，为了成为更好的自己，请以“To Be Better”为题，根据以下提示问题，谈谈你遇到的挑战、解决的方法和新年的决心。
1. How was your life in 2025? 2. What problems/challenges did you meet? And how did you solve them? 3. What are your New Year's resolutions? Something more about them.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右。
To Be Better






请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。

One possible version:
To Be Better
The year 2025 is coming to an end. To me,the year 2025 was full of happiness,challenges and difficulties.
I spent a happy time with my family and my friends. We exercised,sang and played freely in nature. Of course,I met different kinds of difficulties. I was poor at physics. But luckily I have a great teacher. He offered a lot of help with my physics. What's more important,I never gave up. In the end,I made it. As for my New Year's resolutions,I'll make more friends. Also I'm going to take up a hobby like taking photos. And I'll try to make a weekly plan for schoolwork.
All in all,I'll be better in 2026.

【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以"To Be Better"为题，围绕三个指定问题（2025年的生活状态、遇到的挑战及解决方法、新年决心）完成80词左右的短文，需使用第一人称，时态结合语境区分（描述2025年用一般过去时，描述新年决心用一般将来时），同时保证内容完整、语法正确、逻辑连贯。解题思路：1. 审题：锁定人称、时态、核心要点；2. 构思内容：对应三个问题搭建框架，先总述2025年的整体情况，再细化挑战与解决过程，最后明确新年决心；3. 组织语言：加入合适连接词，控制词数，避免个人信息泄露。
【解析】
按照题目要求，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点题：说明2025年即将结束，总述该年充满快乐、挑战与困难；
2. 主体内容：① 描述2025年的快乐经历（与家人朋友相处的时光）；② 具体挑战（物理薄弱）及解决方法（老师帮助+自身坚持，最终克服困难）；③ 新年决心（交更多朋友、培养摄影爱好、制定每周学习计划）；
3. 结尾总结：表达2026年要变得更好的愿望。
全程使用第一人称，时态匹配语境，加入连接词使逻辑清晰，词数符合要求。
【答案】
To Be Better
The year 2025 is coming to an end. To me, the year 2025 was full of happiness, challenges and difficulties.
I spent a happy time with my family and my friends. We exercised, sang and played freely in nature. Of course, I met different kinds of difficulties. I was poor at physics. But luckily I have a great teacher. He offered a lot of help with my physics. What's more important, I never gave up. In the end, I made it. As for my New Year's resolutions, I'll make more friends. Also I'm going to take up a hobby like taking photos. And I'll try to make a weekly plan for schoolwork.
All in all, I'll be better in 2026.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；一般过去时；一般将来时
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，覆盖了所有指定内容；人称正确（第一人称），时态运用恰当；使用了Of course、What's more等连接词使逻辑连贯，语法准确，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的习作。
【难度系数】
0.6

任务一:根据图片填写对应的职业和规划。
Feifei:I am going to become a
1. in the future because
2..
I am going to 3. to make it come true.

What is your dream job?
How are you going to achieve your dream?
Honghong:I am going to become
a 4. in the future because
5..To make it come true,
I 6..
Lily:I want to become a 7. because 8..I am going to 9..
Adam:I am going to become a 10. because 11..To achieve my goal,12..
任务二:假如你是李华,请你对上图不同人的回答口头作一个新闻播报。

任务一答案
1. fireman
2. my father is a fireman/I'm always glad to help others/…
3. exercise more and learn how to put out fires/…
4. doctor
5. I am ready to help others/…
6. am going to attend a medical university for a better education/…
7. photographer
8. I like taking pictures/I want to show the beauty of the world/…
9. take photography classes to improve my skills/…
10. farmer
11. I want to do something to help feed people/…
12. I am going to learn how to grow plants/…
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任务二参考播报
Hello everyone, I'm Li Hua, your reporter. Today we interviewed several classmates about their dream jobs and their plans to make the dreams come true.
Feifei says he is going to be a fireman in the future, because he admires his fireman father a lot and hopes to help people out of danger. He will keep doing exercise to build a strong body and learn professional fire fighting knowledge to make his dream come true.
Honghong's dream job is to be a doctor. She wants to take good care of sick people and save more lives. To make it come true, she says she will work hard on all medical related subjects and enter a good medical university for further professional education.
Lily wants to become a photographer, for she loves to record all the beautiful little moments around us. She is going to take professional photography courses and practice taking photos as much as possible to improve her skills.
Adam hopes to be a modern farmer in the future. He wants to grow high-quality healthy food to feed more people. To achieve his goal, he will learn advanced scientific farming knowledge and skills to make his dream come true.
All of them have great dreams, and let's wish all of them can make their dreams come true one day!

【分析】
这道题分为任务一和任务二，任务一需根据图片确定对应职业，再结合职业特点填写合理的原因与未来计划，核心是掌握常见职业的英文表达及一般将来时的用法；任务二要求以李华身份做新闻播报，需整合任务一内容为通顺的口语化表达。解题时先观察图片匹配职业，再围绕职业意义填写原因和计划，最后组织连贯的播报内容。
【解析】
任务一：1. Feifei的图片是消防员，对应职业名词fireman；2. 原因可围绕消防员帮助他人的职责或个人崇拜；3. 计划可围绕锻炼体能、学习消防知识；4. Honghong的图片是医生，对应doctor；5. 原因可围绕帮助病人、拯救生命；6. 计划可围绕上医科大学、学习医学相关科目；7. Lily的图片是摄影师，对应photographer；8. 原因可围绕喜欢拍照、记录美好；9. 计划可围绕上摄影课、多练习；10. Adam的图片是农民，对应farmer；11. 原因可围绕种食物帮助他人；12. 计划可围绕学习科学种植知识。任务二：将四个角色的职业、原因、计划整合，以新闻播报形式，开头介绍采访主题，中间分别介绍每个人的梦想与计划，结尾祝福，符合口语表达逻辑。
【答案】
任务一答案：1. fireman 2. my father is a fireman/I'm always glad to help others/… 3. exercise more and learn how to put out fires/… 4. doctor 5. I am ready to help others/… 6. am going to attend a medical university for a better education/… 7. photographer 8. I like taking pictures/I want to show the beauty of the world/… 9. take photography classes to improve my skills/… 10. farmer 11. I want to do something to help feed people/… 12. I am going to learn how to grow plants/… 任务二参考播报：Hello everyone, I'm Li Hua, your reporter. Today we interviewed several classmates about their dream jobs and their plans to make the dreams come true. Feifei says he is going to be a fireman in the future, because he admires his fireman father a lot and hopes to help people out of danger. He will keep doing exercise to build a strong body and learn professional fire fighting knowledge to make his dream come true. Honghong's dream job is to be a doctor. She wants to take good care of sick people and save more lives. To make it come true, she says she will work hard on all medical related subjects and enter a good medical university for further professional education. Lily wants to become a photographer, for she loves to record all the beautiful little moments around us. She is going to take professional photography courses and practice taking photos as much as possible to improve her skills. Adam hopes to be a modern farmer in the future. He wants to grow high-quality healthy food to feed more people. To achieve his goal, he will learn advanced scientific farming knowledge and skills to make his dream come true. All of them have great dreams, and let's wish all of them can make their dreams come true one day!
【知识点】
职业名词、一般将来时、口语表达
【点评】
本题结合图片考查常见职业词汇和未来计划的表达，贴近学生生活，既考查基础词汇掌握，又锻炼语言组织与口语应用能力，题型灵活实用。
【难度系数】
0.6