经典例题
你的学校将举办一场时装设计比赛,请根据表格中提供的信息,以“My fashion design”为题,写一篇短文。词数70左右。

你的学校将举办一场时装设计比赛,请根据表格中提供的信息,以“My fashion design”为题,写一篇短文。词数70左右。
答案
My fashion design
Hello, everyone! Now I want to show my fashion design.
The blouse is red and it is made of cotton. It is soft and light. The skirt is black, it is made of silk, and it is very delicate and comfortable. The pair of boots is grey and made of leather. They look very modern.
This set of clothes matches very well, and it is suitable for young girls.
Hello, everyone! Now I want to show my fashion design.
The blouse is red and it is made of cotton. It is soft and light. The skirt is black, it is made of silk, and it is very delicate and comfortable. The pair of boots is grey and made of leather. They look very modern.
This set of clothes matches very well, and it is suitable for young girls.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My fashion design”为题,根据表格提供的衣服、颜色、材质、特征等信息写一篇70词左右的短文。解题思路:首先用问候语引出时装设计主题,接着依次介绍每件衣服的颜色、材质和对应特征,最后总结这套搭配的特点及适用人群,确保语句通顺、信息完整,符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤:
1. 开头:用“Hello, everyone! Now I want to show my fashion design.”引出主题;
2. 介绍女式衬衫:对应表格中“红色的”“棉布”,补充合理特征,即“The blouse is red and it is made of cotton. It is soft and light.”;
3. 介绍短裙:对应表格中“黑色的”“精致且舒适”,补充材质,即“The skirt is black, it is made of silk, and it is very delicate and comfortable.”;
4. 介绍靴子:对应表格中“灰色的”“皮革”,补充特征,即“The pair of boots is grey and made of leather. They look very modern.”;
5. 结尾:总结搭配特点及适用人群,即“This set of clothes matches very well, and it is suitable for young girls.”;
整体调整语句连贯,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
My fashion design
Hello, everyone! Now I want to show my fashion design.
The blouse is red and it is made of cotton. It is soft and light. The skirt is black, it is made of silk, and it is very delicate and comfortable. The pair of boots is grey and made of leather. They look very modern.
This set of clothes matches very well, and it is suitable for young girls.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、信息提取表达
【点评】
本题考查学生根据给定表格信息进行英语短文写作的能力,需准确提取信息并合理补充细节,语句连贯贴合主题,是初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“My fashion design”为题,根据表格提供的衣服、颜色、材质、特征等信息写一篇70词左右的短文。解题思路:首先用问候语引出时装设计主题,接着依次介绍每件衣服的颜色、材质和对应特征,最后总结这套搭配的特点及适用人群,确保语句通顺、信息完整,符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤:
1. 开头:用“Hello, everyone! Now I want to show my fashion design.”引出主题;
2. 介绍女式衬衫:对应表格中“红色的”“棉布”,补充合理特征,即“The blouse is red and it is made of cotton. It is soft and light.”;
3. 介绍短裙:对应表格中“黑色的”“精致且舒适”,补充材质,即“The skirt is black, it is made of silk, and it is very delicate and comfortable.”;
4. 介绍靴子:对应表格中“灰色的”“皮革”,补充特征,即“The pair of boots is grey and made of leather. They look very modern.”;
5. 结尾:总结搭配特点及适用人群,即“This set of clothes matches very well, and it is suitable for young girls.”;
整体调整语句连贯,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
My fashion design
Hello, everyone! Now I want to show my fashion design.
The blouse is red and it is made of cotton. It is soft and light. The skirt is black, it is made of silk, and it is very delicate and comfortable. The pair of boots is grey and made of leather. They look very modern.
This set of clothes matches very well, and it is suitable for young girls.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、信息提取表达
【点评】
本题考查学生根据给定表格信息进行英语短文写作的能力,需准确提取信息并合理补充细节,语句连贯贴合主题,是初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
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