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假设你是李华，你们班开展了题为“校园生活变化”的讨论活动。请根据表格所给提示，写一篇英语短文，叙述你对校园生活变化的观察及感受。
| 内容 | 过去 | 现在 |
| --- | --- | --- |
| 学习方式 | 纸质
| 电子资源 |
| 课外活动 | 少且单一 | 多且多样(社团、竞赛等) |
写作要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
School life has changed a lot in many ways in the past few years.
假设你是李华，你们班开展了题为“校园生活变化”的讨论活动。请根据表格所给提示，写一篇英语短文，叙述你对校园生活变化的观察及感受。
| 内容 | 过去 | 现在 |
| --- | --- | --- |
| 学习方式 | 纸质
| 电子资源 || 课外活动 | 少且单一 | 多且多样(社团、竞赛等) |
写作要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
School life has changed a lot in many ways in the past few years.
As for learning methods, people used to depend on paper books. Now, we often use electronic resources like e-books and online dictionaries. Besides, we now study with groups more often instead of studying alone, which helps us learn better. When it comes to after-school activities, there were few and simple ones in the past. However, now there are many kinds of activities such as clubs, competitions and sports meets. I joined the science club and I have learned a lot. In addition, our way of communicating with teachers has also changed greatly. Before, we seldom talked with teachers after class, but now we often interact with them both in and out of class, and they are always willing to help us solve our problems. These changes have made my school life more colourful and meaningful.
答案
参考范文：
School life has changed a lot in many ways in the past few years.
As for learning methods, people used to depend on paper books. Now, we often use electronic resources like e-books and online dictionaries. Besides, we now study with groups more often instead of studying alone, which helps us learn better. When it comes to after-school activities, there were few and simple ones in the past. However, now there are many kinds of activities such as clubs, competitions and sports meets. I joined the science club and I have learned a lot. In addition, our way of communicating with teachers has also changed greatly. Before, we seldom talked with teachers after class, but now we often interact with them both in and out of class, and they are always willing to help us solve our problems.
These changes have made my school life more colourful and meaningful.
School life has changed a lot in many ways in the past few years.
As for learning methods, people used to depend on paper books. Now, we often use electronic resources like e-books and online dictionaries. Besides, we now study with groups more often instead of studying alone, which helps us learn better. When it comes to after-school activities, there were few and simple ones in the past. However, now there are many kinds of activities such as clubs, competitions and sports meets. I joined the science club and I have learned a lot. In addition, our way of communicating with teachers has also changed greatly. Before, we seldom talked with teachers after class, but now we often interact with them both in and out of class, and they are always willing to help us solve our problems.
These changes have made my school life more colourful and meaningful.
解析
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份，围绕“校园生活变化”写英语短文，需结合表格中“学习方式”“课外活动”的过去与现在的变化展开，承接已给开头，分两部分叙述具体变化，最后表达个人感受，控制词数在80左右，且不得出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】首先承接已给开头，先叙述学习方式的变化：过去依赖纸质资料，现在使用电子资源（如电子书、在线词典等）；接着叙述课外活动的变化：过去活动少且单一，现在有社团、竞赛等多样活动；最后总结这些变化让校园生活更丰富有意义，注意运用一般过去时描述过去，一般现在时描述现在，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】School life has changed a lot in many ways in the past few years. As for learning methods, people used to depend on paper books. Now, we often use electronic resources like e-books and online dictionaries. When it comes to after-school activities, there were few and simple ones in the past. However, now there are many kinds of activities such as clubs and competitions. These changes have made my school life more colourful and meaningful.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，校园话题，时态对比
【点评】该写作紧扣主题，结合表格提示内容，结构清晰，时态运用准确，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接已给开头，先叙述学习方式的变化：过去依赖纸质资料，现在使用电子资源（如电子书、在线词典等）；接着叙述课外活动的变化：过去活动少且单一，现在有社团、竞赛等多样活动；最后总结这些变化让校园生活更丰富有意义，注意运用一般过去时描述过去，一般现在时描述现在，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】School life has changed a lot in many ways in the past few years. As for learning methods, people used to depend on paper books. Now, we often use electronic resources like e-books and online dictionaries. When it comes to after-school activities, there were few and simple ones in the past. However, now there are many kinds of activities such as clubs and competitions. These changes have made my school life more colourful and meaningful.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，校园话题，时态对比
【点评】该写作紧扣主题，结合表格提示内容，结构清晰，时态运用准确，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
