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假设你是李梅，收到了英国笔友Jack的邮件，邮件中谈到了他在学校中的学习情况以及他本人的一些爱好。请你给他回一封邮件，谈谈你在学校里的情况，如：你在几年级，学什么科目，你最喜欢哪门学科，最喜欢哪项体育运动及原因等。词数不少于60。
Dear Jack,
Yours,
Li Mei
思路点拨
逐步突破——三步训练法
（一）短语翻译——根据写作要点翻译短语。
1. 最喜欢的科目
2. 擅长
3. 有趣又有用
4. 学习关于……
5. 努力工作
（二）句子翻译——结合（一）中短语和括号内的提示完成句子。
1. 我擅长说和记新单词。（remember）
2. 我喜欢它，因为它有趣又有用。（because）
3. 它也让我了解这个世界。（It makes sb…）
（三）篇章展示——运用（二）中句子组成语段。
Dear Jack,
Yours,
Li Mei
假设你是李梅，收到了英国笔友Jack的邮件，邮件中谈到了他在学校中的学习情况以及他本人的一些爱好。请你给他回一封邮件，谈谈你在学校里的情况，如：你在几年级，学什么科目，你最喜欢哪门学科，最喜欢哪项体育运动及原因等。词数不少于60。
Dear Jack,
Yours,
Li Mei
思路点拨
逐步突破——三步训练法
（一）短语翻译——根据写作要点翻译短语。
1. 最喜欢的科目
favourite subject
2. 擅长
be good at
3. 有趣又有用
interesting and useful
4. 学习关于……
learn about
5. 努力工作
work hard
（二）句子翻译——结合（一）中短语和括号内的提示完成句子。
1. 我擅长说和记新单词。（remember）
I'm good at speaking and remembering new words.
2. 我喜欢它，因为它有趣又有用。（because）
I like it because it's interesting and useful.
3. 它也让我了解这个世界。（It makes sb…）
It also makes me learn about the world.
（三）篇章展示——运用（二）中句子组成语段。
Dear Jack,
Yours,
Li Mei
答案
（一）
1. favourite subject
2. be good at
3. interesting and useful
4. learn about
5. work hard
（二）
1. I'm good at speaking and remembering new words.
2. I like it because it's interesting and useful.
3. It also makes me learn about the world.
（三）
Dear Jack,
I am in Class Eight, Grade Seven in a middle school this year. Let me tell you something about my busy term.
I have some new subjects. They are geography, biology and history. My favourite subject is English. I'm good at speaking and remembering new words. I like it because it's interesting and useful. It also makes me learn about the world. I have PE every Friday. My favourite sport is tennis. I think it's relaxing.
I like my school life and I work hard to learn all the subjects well.
Yours,
Li Mei
1. favourite subject
2. be good at
3. interesting and useful
4. learn about
5. work hard
（二）
1. I'm good at speaking and remembering new words.
2. I like it because it's interesting and useful.
3. It also makes me learn about the world.
（三）
Dear Jack,
I am in Class Eight, Grade Seven in a middle school this year. Let me tell you something about my busy term.
I have some new subjects. They are geography, biology and history. My favourite subject is English. I'm good at speaking and remembering new words. I like it because it's interesting and useful. It also makes me learn about the world. I have PE every Friday. My favourite sport is tennis. I think it's relaxing.
I like my school life and I work hard to learn all the subjects well.
Yours,
Li Mei
解析
【分析】首先审题明确：体裁为英文邮件（应用文），人称用第一人称，时态采用一般现在时；写作框架分为三部分：开头点明所在年级班级（对应提示的I am in...），中间详细介绍最喜欢的科目及原因、最喜欢的体育运动及原因，结尾表达对学校生活的情感。解题时遵循三步训练：先完成短语翻译，再结合提示完成句子翻译，最后将句子串联成符合要求的邮件，确保要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】（一）短语翻译答案：1. favourite subject；2. be good at；3. interesting and useful；4. learn about；5. work hard。（二）句子翻译答案：1. I'm good at speaking and remembering new words.；2. I like it because it's interesting and useful.；3. It also makes me learn about the world.。（三）篇章写作：按照写作框架串联内容，开头说明所在班级年级，中间介绍科目、最喜欢的英语及原因，最喜欢的网球及原因，结尾表达对学校生活的喜爱和努力学习的态度，形成完整邮件。
【答案】Dear Jack,
I am in Class Eight, Grade Seven in a middle school this year. Let me tell you something about my busy term.
I have some new subjects. They are geography, biology and history. My favourite subject is English. I'm good at speaking and remembering new words. I like it because it's interesting and useful. It also makes me learn about the world. I have PE every Friday. My favourite sport is tennis. I think it's relaxing.
I like my school life and I work hard to learn all the subjects well.
Yours,
Li Mei
【知识点】英语邮件写作，一般现在时，常用短语运用
【点评】本题是初中英语典型的应用文写作题，提供清晰的写作框架和思路点拨，降低了写作难度，考查学生的审题能力、语言组织能力和知识点运用能力，符合初中英语课标对写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】（一）短语翻译答案：1. favourite subject；2. be good at；3. interesting and useful；4. learn about；5. work hard。（二）句子翻译答案：1. I'm good at speaking and remembering new words.；2. I like it because it's interesting and useful.；3. It also makes me learn about the world.。（三）篇章写作：按照写作框架串联内容，开头说明所在班级年级，中间介绍科目、最喜欢的英语及原因，最喜欢的网球及原因，结尾表达对学校生活的喜爱和努力学习的态度，形成完整邮件。
【答案】Dear Jack,
I am in Class Eight, Grade Seven in a middle school this year. Let me tell you something about my busy term.
I have some new subjects. They are geography, biology and history. My favourite subject is English. I'm good at speaking and remembering new words. I like it because it's interesting and useful. It also makes me learn about the world. I have PE every Friday. My favourite sport is tennis. I think it's relaxing.
I like my school life and I work hard to learn all the subjects well.
Yours,
Li Mei
【知识点】英语邮件写作，一般现在时，常用短语运用
【点评】本题是初中英语典型的应用文写作题，提供清晰的写作框架和思路点拨，降低了写作难度，考查学生的审题能力、语言组织能力和知识点运用能力，符合初中英语课标对写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.5
