第三节 书面表达。(满分10分)
一个学期的学习生活即将结束,请你写一篇短文回顾这个学期的校园生活。
提示:
1. 人际交往。
2. 校园生活。
3. 新年畅想。
要求:
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,不少于70个单词。
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则计零分。
一个学期的学习生活即将结束,请你写一篇短文回顾这个学期的校园生活。
提示:
1. 人际交往。
2. 校园生活。
3. 新年畅想。
要求:
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,不少于70个单词。
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则计零分。
答案
The school life of this term is almost over. This term is very important to me. In this term, I come to a new school and meet many new teachers and friends there. They are all friendly to me, and I love them very much.
The school life is busy but is very interesting. I have a nice school. There are many beautiful buildings in it, such as the teaching building, the library and the lab building. I also have many subjects to learn at school. I am not good at some of them, but I don't give up, and my teachers and classmates help me a lot.
In the new year, I hope I can study well and be a good football player, because I like playing football.
The school life is busy but is very interesting. I have a nice school. There are many beautiful buildings in it, such as the teaching building, the library and the lab building. I also have many subjects to learn at school. I am not good at some of them, but I don't give up, and my teachers and classmates help me a lot.
In the new year, I hope I can study well and be a good football player, because I like playing football.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:需围绕本学期校园生活,涵盖人际交往、校园生活、新年畅想三个提示,语言流畅、不少于70词且不得使用真实姓名与校名。解题思路:1. 开篇总述学期即将结束,引出回顾主题;2. 分述人际交往:介绍新环境中结识的老师、朋友及他们的友好态度;3. 分述校园生活:描述学校环境、学习情况及他人的帮助;4. 最后表达新年畅想,呼应主题,确保内容完整符合要求。
【解析】
按照题目要求,结合提示内容组织语言:开篇点明学期结束,接着写人际交往(结识新师友,他们很友好),再写校园生活(忙碌有趣,学校有各类建筑,学习遇困难但不放弃,受师友帮助),最后写新年畅想(学好功课,成为足球运动员),保证语言流畅、符合词数要求且无真实信息。
【答案】
The school life of this term is almost over. This term is very important to me. In this term, I come to a new school and meet many new teachers and friends there. They are all friendly to me, and I love them very much.
The school life is busy but is very interesting. I have a nice school. There are many beautiful buildings in it, such as the teaching building, the library and the lab building. I also have many subjects to learn at school. I am not good at some of them, but I don't give up, and my teachers and classmates help me a lot.
In the new year, I hope I can study well and be a good football player, because I like playing football.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、校园话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖人际交往、校园生活、新年畅想三个提示要点,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求,无真实信息,是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确题目要求:需围绕本学期校园生活,涵盖人际交往、校园生活、新年畅想三个提示,语言流畅、不少于70词且不得使用真实姓名与校名。解题思路:1. 开篇总述学期即将结束,引出回顾主题;2. 分述人际交往:介绍新环境中结识的老师、朋友及他们的友好态度;3. 分述校园生活:描述学校环境、学习情况及他人的帮助;4. 最后表达新年畅想,呼应主题,确保内容完整符合要求。
【解析】
按照题目要求,结合提示内容组织语言:开篇点明学期结束,接着写人际交往(结识新师友,他们很友好),再写校园生活(忙碌有趣,学校有各类建筑,学习遇困难但不放弃,受师友帮助),最后写新年畅想(学好功课,成为足球运动员),保证语言流畅、符合词数要求且无真实信息。
【答案】
The school life of this term is almost over. This term is very important to me. In this term, I come to a new school and meet many new teachers and friends there. They are all friendly to me, and I love them very much.
The school life is busy but is very interesting. I have a nice school. There are many beautiful buildings in it, such as the teaching building, the library and the lab building. I also have many subjects to learn at school. I am not good at some of them, but I don't give up, and my teachers and classmates help me a lot.
In the new year, I hope I can study well and be a good football player, because I like playing football.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、校园话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖人际交往、校园生活、新年畅想三个提示要点,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求,无真实信息,是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.7
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