Ⅸ.Writing.(写作)
同学们最喜欢周末了,因为在周末可以做一些自己喜欢的事情,请你以"My
weekend"为题写一篇作文介绍一下你的周末活动。不少于5句话。
注意正确运用表达时间的词语: on Saturday/on Sunday, in the afternoon, on
Sunday morning/on Sunday afternoon
同学们最喜欢周末了,因为在周末可以做一些自己喜欢的事情,请你以"My
weekend"为题写一篇作文介绍一下你的周末活动。不少于5句话。
注意正确运用表达时间的词语: on Saturday/on Sunday, in the afternoon, on
Sunday morning/on Sunday afternoon
答案
My weekend
On Saturday morning, I always have chess classes. I study hard in the classroom. In the afternoon, I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I read books. On Sunday afternoon I often go shopping with my mother.
On Saturday morning, I always have chess classes. I study hard in the classroom. In the afternoon, I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I read books. On Sunday afternoon I often go shopping with my mother.
解析
【分析】
首先,我们要明确这篇作文的主题是介绍自己的周末活动,需紧扣题目要求,运用指定的时间表达词语,且不少于5句话。解题思路如下:
1. 确定作文框架,按照时间顺序(周六上午、周六下午、周日上午、周日下午)展开内容,保证逻辑清晰,符合阅读习惯;
2. 每个时间节点搭配具体日常活动,加入always、often、sometimes这类频率副词,让活动描述更贴近真实生活;
3. 开篇点明标题,依次展开各时段活动,确保正确使用题目要求的时间短语,最后自然收尾,保证语句通顺、内容充实。
【解析】
1. 开篇写出作文标题:My weekend,明确主题;
2. 描述周六上午的活动:用“On Saturday morning, I always have chess classes. I study hard in the classroom.”,使用指定时间短语on Saturday morning,用always体现固定的周末安排;
3. 描述周六下午的活动:“In the afternoon, I often play computer games.”,运用in the afternoon这个时间表达,用often说明活动的频率;
4. 描述周日上午的活动:“On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I read books.”,使用on Sunday morning,用often和sometimes结合,丰富活动内容,体现周末活动的多样性;
5. 描述周日下午的活动:“On Sunday afternoon I often go shopping with my mother.”,用on Sunday afternoon这个指定短语,完成最后一个时段的活动描述,整体内容满足不少于5句话的要求,且所有时间表达都符合题目规定。
【答案】
My weekend
On Saturday morning, I always have chess classes. I study hard in the classroom. In the afternoon, I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I read books. On Sunday afternoon I often go shopping with my mother.
【知识点】
1. 时间介词运用
2. 日常活动表达
3. 一般现在时表习惯
【点评】
这篇作文严格按照题目要求完成,以时间顺序清晰展开周末活动,正确运用了题目指定的时间表达词语,内容丰富且贴近生活,通过always、often、sometimes等频率副词的使用,让活动描述更真实自然,语句通顺流畅,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇规范的周末活动介绍作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先,我们要明确这篇作文的主题是介绍自己的周末活动,需紧扣题目要求,运用指定的时间表达词语,且不少于5句话。解题思路如下:
1. 确定作文框架,按照时间顺序(周六上午、周六下午、周日上午、周日下午)展开内容,保证逻辑清晰,符合阅读习惯;
2. 每个时间节点搭配具体日常活动,加入always、often、sometimes这类频率副词,让活动描述更贴近真实生活;
3. 开篇点明标题,依次展开各时段活动,确保正确使用题目要求的时间短语,最后自然收尾,保证语句通顺、内容充实。
【解析】
1. 开篇写出作文标题:My weekend,明确主题;
2. 描述周六上午的活动:用“On Saturday morning, I always have chess classes. I study hard in the classroom.”,使用指定时间短语on Saturday morning,用always体现固定的周末安排;
3. 描述周六下午的活动:“In the afternoon, I often play computer games.”,运用in the afternoon这个时间表达,用often说明活动的频率;
4. 描述周日上午的活动:“On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I read books.”,使用on Sunday morning,用often和sometimes结合,丰富活动内容,体现周末活动的多样性;
5. 描述周日下午的活动:“On Sunday afternoon I often go shopping with my mother.”,用on Sunday afternoon这个指定短语,完成最后一个时段的活动描述,整体内容满足不少于5句话的要求,且所有时间表达都符合题目规定。
【答案】
My weekend
On Saturday morning, I always have chess classes. I study hard in the classroom. In the afternoon, I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I read books. On Sunday afternoon I often go shopping with my mother.
【知识点】
1. 时间介词运用
2. 日常活动表达
3. 一般现在时表习惯
【点评】
这篇作文严格按照题目要求完成,以时间顺序清晰展开周末活动,正确运用了题目指定的时间表达词语,内容丰富且贴近生活,通过always、often、sometimes等频率副词的使用,让活动描述更真实自然,语句通顺流畅,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇规范的周末活动介绍作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
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