1.写作任务
假设你是弗兰克Frank，你和你的家人正在海南度假。请你根据图片及提示内容，描述一下海南的天气以及你和家人的活动。
要求:60词左右。

2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲

第三步:句子积累
(1)I'm with my family in Hainan, China.
我和我的家人正在中国海南度假。
(2)Let me the weather here and what we are doing now.
让我告诉你这里的天气情况以及我们现在正在做什么。
(3)The weather is .天气晴朗而炎热。
(4)My sister Rose and I are .我妹妹罗丝和我情绪高涨。
(5)We are here.我们在这里玩得很开心。
3.范文品鉴
I'm having a holiday with my family in Hainan, China.点出主题Let me tell you something about the weather here and what we are doing now.引出下文
The weather is sunny and hot. My father is swimming in the sea. He likes swimming very much. He feels like a fish in the sea. My mother is sunbathing on the beach. It's relaxing. My sister Rose and I are in high spirits. She is playing on the beach. I'm playing beach volleyball.具体活动及感受
We are having a great time here. Everyone feels relaxed and enjoys the experience.总结感受
类文训练
假如你是李华,你和父母正在杭州度假,今天你们游览杭州西湖the West Lake。请你根据以下要点提示给朋友史蒂夫Steve写一张明信片。
要点:1. What's the weather like in Hangzhou?
2. What are you doing in Hangzhou?
3. Are you having a good time?
要求:1.明信片上的内容须包含要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.60词左右开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

2.第一步:审题
记叙文 第一、第三人称 现在进行时
第三步:句子积累
(1)having a holiday (2)tell you something about (3)sunny and hot (4)in high spirits (5)having a
great time
类文训练
One possible version:
Dear Steve,
How's it going? I'm on a vacation with my family in Hangzhou. Hangzhou is very beautiful. The weather
here is great in August. It's sunny today and it's not very hot. We're taking a boat tour on the West Lake
now. It is so interesting and relaxing! My mother is taking photos. My father is drinking tea. The green tea is
very nice and I want to buy some for you. In the afternoon, we want to take a walk by the lake.
We're all having a good time today.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】
首先梳理清晰解题逻辑：1. 先完成审题填空：明确写作的核心属性，描述度假见闻属于记叙类文体，叙事以第一人称（自身视角）展开，描述家人活动时用到第三人称，所有场景都是当下正在发生的，因此核心时态为现在进行时。2. 完成句子积累：对照给出的中文提示，结合后文范文的划线提示，匹配对应的固定短语即可完成填空。3. 完成类文写作：首先覆盖题干要求的三个核心要点：①点明杭州当日天气状况 ②分别描述自己和父母游览西湖的具体活动 ③说明游玩感受，整体控制词数在60左右，衔接自然符合明信片的写作语境即可。
【解析】
步骤1：审题部分解答
体裁：该写作围绕度假过程中的见闻与活动展开，属于记叙文
人称：以第一人称"我"作为叙事视角，描述家人活动时使用第三人称，因此为第一、第三人称
时态：所有活动都是当下正在发生的动作，核心使用现在进行时
步骤2：句子积累填空
(1) 对应中文"正在度假"，结合现在进行时结构be doing，填入having a holiday
(2) 对应中文"告诉你...的情况"，填入固定搭配tell you something about
(3) 对应中文"晴朗而炎热"，填入sunny and hot
(4) 对应中文"情绪高涨"，填入固定短语in high spirits
(5) 对应中文"玩得开心"，结合现在进行时结构，填入having a great time。
步骤3：类文写作
按照明信片格式，覆盖所有要点，补充合理细节，保证语句通顺语法正确，控制词数完成写作。
【答案】
2.第一步:审题
记叙文 第一、第三人称 现在进行时
第二步：列提纲
my family，Hainan
the weather here and what we are doing now，
sunny and hot，
swimming in the sea，a fish in the sea
sunbathing on the beach，relaxing
is playing on the beach
playing beach volleyball
great
relaxed，the experience
第三步:句子积累
(1)having a holiday (2)tell you something about (3)sunny and hot (4)in high spirits (5)having a great time
类文训练
One possible version:
Dear Steve,
How's it going? I'm on a vacation with my family in Hangzhou. Hangzhou is very beautiful. The weather here is great in August. It's sunny today and it's not very hot. We're taking a boat tour on the West Lake now. It is so interesting and relaxing! My mother is taking photos. My father is drinking tea. The green tea is very nice and I want to buy some for you. In the afternoon, we want to take a walk by the lake.
We're all having a good time today.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
现在进行时，英语应用文写作，固定短语搭配
【点评】
本题采用分层设计，从审题指导、基础句子填空到完整篇章输出逐步引导，降低了写作的入门难度，既可以帮助学生巩固现在进行时的结构用法，也能锻炼学生描述场景、记叙人物活动的书面表达能力，贴合初中低年级英语写作的训练目标。
【难度系数】
0.6