写作演练＞＞
假设你是李兵，你校试行在课间播放音乐的方案。你们班同学对此进行了讨论，大家看法不一。大多数同学赞同，而部分同学反对。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，给你们的校长写一封

Dear Principal,
Recently our class had a discussion about the new plan to play music during class breaks. Here is the result of our discussion.
Most students support the plan. They believe music can create a relaxing lively atmosphere, help us relax our brain after long-time study and reduce pressure. With pleasant music, we can get refreshed and keep a good mood to improve our study efficiency later.
However, some students are against the plan. They say the break time is quite short, so we can't get enough rest with music playing. Besides, some students will still think about the content of the music even after class begins, and fail to focus on their lessons. Some noisy music is also not suitable for the school environment.
I suggest we can play some soft gentle music only during the long mid-morning break. I hope you can consider our advice.
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing

【分析】本题要求以李兵的身份给校长写一封英文信，围绕班级对“课间播放音乐方案”的讨论结果展开写作。解题思路：首先遵循英文书信的规范格式（称呼、正文、署名）；其次正文开篇点明讨论主题，接着分两部分分别阐述多数同学赞同该方案的理由、部分同学反对的理由；最后结合讨论结果提出合理建议，表达希望校长考虑的诉求，确保内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【解析】按照英文书信结构分步写作：1. 开头：称呼Dear Principal，说明班级针对“课间播放音乐的新方案”展开了讨论；2. 阐述赞同方观点：多数同学认为音乐能营造轻松活泼的氛围，缓解长时间学习后的大脑疲劳、减轻压力，帮助恢复状态以提升后续学习效率；3. 阐述反对方观点：部分同学认为课间时间短，音乐无法让他们充分休息，还会导致课后注意力不集中，部分嘈杂音乐也不适宜校园环境；4. 提出个人建议：仅在较长的上午课间播放轻柔的音乐；5. 结尾：表达希望校长考虑建议，署名Li Bing。
【答案】Dear Principal,
Recently our class had a discussion about the new plan to play music during class breaks. Here is the result of our discussion.
Most students support the plan. They believe music can create a relaxing lively atmosphere, help us relax our brain after long-time study and reduce pressure. With pleasant music, we can get refreshed and keep a good mood to improve our study efficiency later.
However, some students are against the plan. They say the break time is quite short, so we can't get enough rest with music playing. Besides, some students will still think about the content of the music even after class begins, and fail to focus on their lessons. Some noisy music is also not suitable for the school environment.
I suggest we can play some soft gentle music only during the long mid-morning break. I hope you can consider our advice.
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing
【知识点】英语书信写作、观点表达写作
【点评】本题以校园热点话题为载体，考查学生的英文书信格式掌握情况及观点论述能力，要求学生能清晰表达不同立场并提出合理建议，贴近学生生活，易于上手。
【难度系数】0.6

② 使用“whether ... or ...”引导让步状语从句，无论开心或悲伤，音乐都常伴左右，句式地道，贴合单元语法知识点。
③ 运用whenever引导时间状语从句，描述听歌时的感受，逻辑自然，情感表达细腻。
④ 用because引导原因状语从句，清晰介绍推荐歌曲的理由，衔接紧凑，突出文章主旨。
信介绍大家的观点，同时谈谈自己的看法。

[思路点拨]
① 体裁:应用文;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 人称:以第三人称为主;④ 首先介绍赞同者的观点及原因,然后介绍反对者的观点及原因,最后陈述自己的观点。注意补充省略号部分的信息,可适当使用从句或连词。
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写作专训
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class have given their ideas.
Most students agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can bring joy to them. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
However, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music during the short break. In addition, some students are still lost in music in class, which has a bad effect on students.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I disagree.
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing

【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求写一封给校长的信，讨论课间是否播放音乐。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为书信，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；2. 按照思路点拨，分三部分写作：先介绍赞同者的观点及原因，再介绍反对者的观点及原因，最后陈述自己的观点；3. 需运用指定的从句结构（whether...or...让步状语从句、whenever时间状语从句、because原因状语从句），贴合单元语法知识点，使表达地道自然。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开头：称呼Dear Headmaster，点明班级讨论的主题（课间是否播放音乐），引出同学们的观点；
2. 赞同者观点：多数学生赞同课间播放音乐，理由包括：音乐带来快乐、帮助学习后放松、提高学习效率；
3. 反对者观点：部分学生反对，理由包括：担心课间听音乐达不到预期效果、部分学生上课沉迷音乐影响学习；
4. 自己的观点：明确表达看法，用从句衔接，最后落款。
具体内容如下：
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class have given their ideas.
Most students agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can bring joy to them. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
However, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music during the short break. In addition, some students are still lost in music in class, which has a bad effect on students.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I disagree.
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing
【答案】
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class have given their ideas.
Most students agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can bring joy to them. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
However, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music during the short break. In addition, some students are still lost in music in class, which has a bad effect on students.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I disagree.
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、状语从句运用、书信格式
【点评】
本题为单元写作训练题，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生掌握书信基本格式，能正确运用各类从句表达观点，逻辑清晰，贴合单元语法知识点，有助于提升综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5