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B. 书面表达
假如你是李华，你的外国笔友 Lisa 最近听说了《猴子捞月》的故事，想请你给她写一封电子邮件讲述一下这个故事。内容包括：
(1)《猴子捞月》的故事情节；(2)你的感想。
要求：
(1)不能照译原文；作文中不得出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
(2)语句连贯，词数 70 左右。邮件的格式和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:well 水井
Dear Lisa,
How is it going? You asked me to tell you the story of Monkeys Fishing for the Moon. Here it is.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的外国笔友 Lisa 最近听说了《猴子捞月》的故事，想请你给她写一封电子邮件讲述一下这个故事。内容包括：
(1)《猴子捞月》的故事情节；(2)你的感想。
要求：
(1)不能照译原文；作文中不得出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
(2)语句连贯，词数 70 左右。邮件的格式和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:well 水井
Dear Lisa,
How is it going? You asked me to tell you the story of Monkeys Fishing for the Moon. Here it is.
Once upon a time, there were some monkeys playing happily in the forest. Suddenly, a little monkey found the moon was in a well. He didn't know that it was the shadow of the moon. It made him worried, so he asked all the monkeys to help the moon.
Therefore, the monkeys tried their best to fish for the moon. In the end, everyone was tired until one of the monkeys looked up at the sky and found the moon was still in the sky.
From the story, we know that if we want to do something that doesn't exist, we will never succeed.
Do you like the story? Please tell me what you think.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
参考范文：
Once upon a time, there were some monkeys playing happily in the forest. Suddenly, a little monkey found the moon was in a well. He didn't know that it was the shadow of the moon. It made him worried, so he asked all the monkeys to help the moon. Therefore, the monkeys tried their best to fish for the moon. In the end, everyone was tired until one of the monkeys looked up at the sky and found the moon was still in the sky.
From the story, we know that if we want to do something that doesn't exist, we will never succeed.
Do you like the story? Please tell me what you think.
Yours,
Li Hua
Once upon a time, there were some monkeys playing happily in the forest. Suddenly, a little monkey found the moon was in a well. He didn't know that it was the shadow of the moon. It made him worried, so he asked all the monkeys to help the moon. Therefore, the monkeys tried their best to fish for the moon. In the end, everyone was tired until one of the monkeys looked up at the sky and found the moon was still in the sky.
From the story, we know that if we want to do something that doesn't exist, we will never succeed.
Do you like the story? Please tell me what you think.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：完成邮件中《猴子捞月》的故事叙述与个人感想，词数约70，已给出邮件开头。解题思路：1. 梳理故事核心情节，用简单英语清晰表述：猴子在森林玩耍→小猴子误将井中月亮影子当成真月亮→召集同伴捞月→发现月亮仍在天空；2. 提炼故事寓意作为感想，贴合故事内容；3. 保持语句连贯，避免直译原文，符合邮件的友好语气，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 承接开头叙述故事：Once upon a time, some monkeys played happily in the forest. A little monkey found the moon in the well, not knowing it was just a shadow. Worried, he called all monkeys to help. They tried their best to fish the moon out, but finally a monkey looked up and saw the real moon in the sky.
2. 表达感想：From the story, we know we shouldn’t mistake illusions for reality, or we’ll do meaningless things.
3. 收尾询问对方看法，符合邮件格式：Do you like this interesting story? What do you think of it?
【答案】
Once upon a time, some monkeys played happily in the forest. A little monkey found the moon in the well, not knowing it was just a shadow. Worried, he called all monkeys to help. They tried their best to fish the moon out, but finally a monkey looked up and saw the real moon in the sky. From the story, we know we shouldn’t mistake illusions for reality, or we’ll do meaningless things. Do you like this interesting story? What do you think of it?
【知识点】
英语书信写作、故事叙述、观点表达
【点评】
本题为英语书面表达题，考察学生的故事叙述能力、观点表达能力及邮件格式运用，要求内容完整、语句连贯，符合词数要求，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务：完成邮件中《猴子捞月》的故事叙述与个人感想，词数约70，已给出邮件开头。解题思路：1. 梳理故事核心情节，用简单英语清晰表述：猴子在森林玩耍→小猴子误将井中月亮影子当成真月亮→召集同伴捞月→发现月亮仍在天空；2. 提炼故事寓意作为感想，贴合故事内容；3. 保持语句连贯，避免直译原文，符合邮件的友好语气，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 承接开头叙述故事：Once upon a time, some monkeys played happily in the forest. A little monkey found the moon in the well, not knowing it was just a shadow. Worried, he called all monkeys to help. They tried their best to fish the moon out, but finally a monkey looked up and saw the real moon in the sky.
2. 表达感想：From the story, we know we shouldn’t mistake illusions for reality, or we’ll do meaningless things.
3. 收尾询问对方看法，符合邮件格式：Do you like this interesting story? What do you think of it?
【答案】
Once upon a time, some monkeys played happily in the forest. A little monkey found the moon in the well, not knowing it was just a shadow. Worried, he called all monkeys to help. They tried their best to fish the moon out, but finally a monkey looked up and saw the real moon in the sky. From the story, we know we shouldn’t mistake illusions for reality, or we’ll do meaningless things. Do you like this interesting story? What do you think of it?
【知识点】
英语书信写作、故事叙述、观点表达
【点评】
本题为英语书面表达题，考察学生的故事叙述能力、观点表达能力及邮件格式运用，要求内容完整、语句连贯，符合词数要求，难度适中，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
