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假定你是李辉,你们学校英语社团正组织一次英语演讲活动,要求介绍令你难忘的一次经历,比如解决困难、迎接挑战、勇敢地进行一些新的尝试等。请你以"我的一次难忘的经历"为主题,写一篇英语演讲稿,内容包括:
1. What happened to you?
2. How did you deal with it?
3. How did you feel? /What did you learn from it?
注意:1. 词数80~100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名、地名及学校名称。
Dear fellow students,
It's my honour to share my unforgettable experience with you.
Thank you for your listening!
1. What happened to you?
2. How did you deal with it?
3. How did you feel? /What did you learn from it?
注意:1. 词数80~100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名、地名及学校名称。
Dear fellow students,
It's my honour to share my unforgettable experience with you.
Last year, I was asked to give an
English speech in front of the whole
school. I was very shy and afraid of
making mistakes. But I didn't want
to give up. So I practised the speech
every day. I asked my teacher for help
and she gave me a lot of useful
advice. I also recorded my speech and
checked my pronunciation again and
again.
Finally, the day came. I was
nervous but I tried my best. When I
finished, everyone clapped for me. I
felt very proud and happy.
From this experience, I learned
that if you worked hard and faced your
fears, you could achieve anything.
English speech in front of the whole
school. I was very shy and afraid of
making mistakes. But I didn't want
to give up. So I practised the speech
every day. I asked my teacher for help
and she gave me a lot of useful
advice. I also recorded my speech and
checked my pronunciation again and
again.
Finally, the day came. I was
nervous but I tried my best. When I
finished, everyone clapped for me. I
felt very proud and happy.
From this experience, I learned
that if you worked hard and faced your
fears, you could achieve anything.
Thank you for your listening!
答案
One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
It's my honour to share my
unforgettable experience with you.
Last year, I was asked to give an
English speech in front of the whole
school. I was very shy and afraid of
making mistakes. But I didn't want
to give up. So I practised the speech
every day. I asked my teacher for help
and she gave me a lot of useful
advice. I also recorded my speech and
checked my pronunciation again and
again.
Finally, the day came. I was
nervous but I tried my best. When I
finished, everyone clapped for me. I
felt very proud and happy.
From this experience, I learned
that if you worked hard and faced your
fears, you could achieve anything.
Thank you for your listening!
Dear fellow students,
It's my honour to share my
unforgettable experience with you.
Last year, I was asked to give an
English speech in front of the whole
school. I was very shy and afraid of
making mistakes. But I didn't want
to give up. So I practised the speech
every day. I asked my teacher for help
and she gave me a lot of useful
advice. I also recorded my speech and
checked my pronunciation again and
again.
Finally, the day came. I was
nervous but I tried my best. When I
finished, everyone clapped for me. I
felt very proud and happy.
From this experience, I learned
that if you worked hard and faced your
fears, you could achieve anything.
Thank you for your listening!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务是围绕“我的一次难忘的经历”写英语演讲稿，需涵盖三个核心内容：发生的事件、应对方式、感受/收获。第一步，选取符合要求的经历（克服害羞参加全校英语演讲，属于迎接挑战的类型）；第二步，按逻辑组织内容：先交代经历背景（被要求演讲，自身的困难），再说明解决过程（不放弃，练习、请教老师、纠发音），最后阐述结果和感悟；同时要注意词数控制在80-100，开头结尾已给出，不得出现真实信息。
【解析】
根据分析，依次撰写内容：1. 点明经历：Last year, I was asked to give an English speech in front of the whole school. I was very shy and afraid of making mistakes, but I didn’t want to give up. 2. 说明应对方式：I practised the speech every day, asked my teacher for useful advice, and recorded my speech to check my pronunciation again and again. 3. 阐述结果与感悟：Finally, I finished the speech and everyone clapped for me. I felt proud and happy, and learned that hard work and facing fears can help us achieve anything. 整合后内容连贯，符合词数要求，覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
It's my honour to share my unforgettable experience with you.
Last year, I was asked to give an English speech in front of the whole school. I was very shy and afraid of making mistakes. But I didn't want to give up. So I practised the speech every day. I asked my teacher for help and she gave me a lot of useful advice. I also recorded my speech and checked my pronunciation again and again.
Finally, the day came. I was nervous but I tried my best. When I finished, everyone clapped for me. I felt very proud and happy.
From this experience, I learned that if you worked hard and faced your fears, you could achieve anything.
Thank you for your listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、英语叙事表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
该演讲稿紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的三个核心要点，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，传递了积极向上的感悟，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确写作任务是围绕“我的一次难忘的经历”写英语演讲稿，需涵盖三个核心内容：发生的事件、应对方式、感受/收获。第一步，选取符合要求的经历（克服害羞参加全校英语演讲，属于迎接挑战的类型）；第二步，按逻辑组织内容：先交代经历背景（被要求演讲，自身的困难），再说明解决过程（不放弃，练习、请教老师、纠发音），最后阐述结果和感悟；同时要注意词数控制在80-100，开头结尾已给出，不得出现真实信息。
【解析】
根据分析，依次撰写内容：1. 点明经历：Last year, I was asked to give an English speech in front of the whole school. I was very shy and afraid of making mistakes, but I didn’t want to give up. 2. 说明应对方式：I practised the speech every day, asked my teacher for useful advice, and recorded my speech to check my pronunciation again and again. 3. 阐述结果与感悟：Finally, I finished the speech and everyone clapped for me. I felt proud and happy, and learned that hard work and facing fears can help us achieve anything. 整合后内容连贯，符合词数要求，覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
It's my honour to share my unforgettable experience with you.
Last year, I was asked to give an English speech in front of the whole school. I was very shy and afraid of making mistakes. But I didn't want to give up. So I practised the speech every day. I asked my teacher for help and she gave me a lot of useful advice. I also recorded my speech and checked my pronunciation again and again.
Finally, the day came. I was nervous but I tried my best. When I finished, everyone clapped for me. I felt very proud and happy.
From this experience, I learned that if you worked hard and faced your fears, you could achieve anything.
Thank you for your listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、英语叙事表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
该演讲稿紧扣主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的三个核心要点，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，传递了积极向上的感悟，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
