七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
你的朋友 Peter 对中国的地理知识非常感兴趣,他在信中表达了想了解中国自然风光的愿望。假如你是李华,请你根据以下
What do you want to introduce?
Why do you introduce it?
What facts do you know about it?
Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100 左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive your email.
Yours,
Li Hua
你的朋友 Peter 对中国的地理知识非常感兴趣,他在信中表达了想了解中国自然风光的愿望。假如你是李华,请你根据以下
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用英语写一封回信。内
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:What do you want to introduce?
Why do you introduce it?
What facts do you know about it?
Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数 100 左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive your email.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive your email. I want to introduce the Yangtze River to you because it's one of the most famous rivers in China. It's also a symbol of Chinese development.
It travels the farthest in China and is about 6,300 kilometres long. It's the third longest in the world. Many people live near it and it helps with farming and transportation. It starts in Qinghai Province and ends in the East China Sea. What's more, the river is very important to Chinese culture and history. It is also called "mother river", like the Yellow River.
If you want to know more about other places, just tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm very glad to receive your email. I want to introduce the Yangtze River to you because it's one of the most famous rivers in China. It's also a symbol of Chinese development.
It travels the farthest in China and is about 6,300 kilometres long. It's the third longest in the world. Many people live near it and it helps with farming and transportation. It starts in Qinghai Province and ends in the East China Sea. What's more, the river is very important to Chinese culture and history. It is also called "mother river", like the Yellow River.
If you want to know more about other places, just tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【解析】
首先回应朋友来信,确定介绍长江以契合其对中国自然风光的兴趣;接着说明介绍原因——长江是中国知名河流,是中国发展的象征;然后阐述长江的核心事实:长度(中国最长、世界第三长,约6300公里)、流经区域(始于青海,注入东海)、对民生的作用(助力农业和交通);最后补充其文化意义,提及它与黄河同被称为“母亲河”,承载中国文化与历史,结尾礼貌邀请朋友进一步提问,完整覆盖题目要求的四大要点。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive your email. I want to introduce the Yangtze River to you because it's one of the most famous rivers in China. It's also a symbol of Chinese development.
It travels the farthest in China and is about 6,300 kilometres long. It's the third longest in the world. Many people live near it and it helps with farming and transportation. It starts in Qinghai Province and ends in the East China Sea. What's more, the river is very important to Chinese culture and history. It is also called "mother river", like the Yellow River.
If you want to know more about other places, just tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、地理主题表达、说明文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,内容条理清晰,完整回应了“介绍对象、介绍原因、相关事实、补充内容”四大要点,语言简洁准确,符合词数要求,同时融入文化元素增强了内容丰富性,是一篇规范且质量较高的英语回信范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先回应朋友来信,确定介绍长江以契合其对中国自然风光的兴趣;接着说明介绍原因——长江是中国知名河流,是中国发展的象征;然后阐述长江的核心事实:长度(中国最长、世界第三长,约6300公里)、流经区域(始于青海,注入东海)、对民生的作用(助力农业和交通);最后补充其文化意义,提及它与黄河同被称为“母亲河”,承载中国文化与历史,结尾礼貌邀请朋友进一步提问,完整覆盖题目要求的四大要点。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to receive your email. I want to introduce the Yangtze River to you because it's one of the most famous rivers in China. It's also a symbol of Chinese development.
It travels the farthest in China and is about 6,300 kilometres long. It's the third longest in the world. Many people live near it and it helps with farming and transportation. It starts in Qinghai Province and ends in the East China Sea. What's more, the river is very important to Chinese culture and history. It is also called "mother river", like the Yellow River.
If you want to know more about other places, just tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、地理主题表达、说明文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,内容条理清晰,完整回应了“介绍对象、介绍原因、相关事实、补充内容”四大要点,语言简洁准确,符合词数要求,同时融入文化元素增强了内容丰富性,是一篇规范且质量较高的英语回信范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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