[写作演练]
[小试身手]
假设你是孙洁，你搬进了新家，请根据下列提示，向你的笔友苏海介绍你的新公寓。
提示：1. 紧邻一个大超市，距学校步行约五分钟。2. 位于十七楼，三室一厅……3. 有自己的卧室，最喜欢阳台，因为……4. 不满意只有一个浴室，要和家人共用。
要求：1. 语言通顺，语意连贯。2. 提示中所给要点必须在文中表达齐全。3. 90词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。

[思路点拨]
① 时态：一般现在时。② 人称：第一、三人称。③ 先介绍位置，然后介绍梦想之家的楼层和布局，最后总结自己满意和不满意的地方。

[写作提纲]
|要点描述| |
|--|--|
|第二段|My new flat is... It's...|
|第三段|My home is... There are...|
|第四段|I'm happy to... The... is my favourite... But there is...|


[妙笔生花]
Dear Su Hai,
How are you? I'm writing to you in my new flat. It brings me great joy to share the details with you.
______________________________
I hope you can come and visit my new flat soon.
Best wishes,
Sun Jie
（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）

One possible version:
Dear Su Hai,
How are you? I'm writing to you in my new flat. It brings me great joy to share the details with you.
My new flat is next to a big supermarket. It's about five minutes' walk from my school.
My home is on the 17th floor. There are three bedrooms, a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and a big balcony.
I'm happy to have my own bedroom now. The balcony is my favourite because I can sit there and chat with my sister. But there is only one bathroom, so I have to share it with my family.
I hope you can come and visit my new flat soon.
Best wishes,
Sun Jie