C Alex is writing an email to John about the film The Hobbit. There are eight mistakes in his email. Underline the mistakes and correct them.
Hi John,

Last week, we talk about the book The Hobbit. I finally read the book. I'm so glad I did. I enjoyed it very much! Did you knew that there is a film version of it too? I watch it last Sunday. It was amazing!
In the film, the world of Middle-earth looks so cool! All of the places and characters were just as I thought it would be. I loved watching Bilbo travel through forests and over mountains. The best part was when he found a powerful ring and realized it could change his life! I think the actors and actresses do a great job too. They make the characters come to life.
There was two more films in The Hobbit series. I can't wait to watch them! Do you want to came over to my place this weekend to watch the films? Let me know!
Cheers,
Alex
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(5) (6) (7) (8)
Hi John,
Last week, we talk about the book The Hobbit. I finally read the book. I'm so glad I did. I enjoyed it very much! Did you knew that there is a film version of it too? I watch it last Sunday. It was amazing!
In the film, the world of Middle-earth looks so cool! All of the places and characters were just as I thought it would be. I loved watching Bilbo travel through forests and over mountains. The best part was when he found a powerful ring and realized it could change his life! I think the actors and actresses do a great job too. They make the characters come to life.
There was two more films in The Hobbit series. I can't wait to watch them! Do you want to came over to my place this weekend to watch the films? Let me know!
Cheers,
Alex
(1) (2) (3) (4)
(5) (6) (7) (8)
答案
(1) talk → talked
(2) knew → know
(3) watch → watched
(4) looks → looked
(5) it → they
(6) do → did
(7) was → were
(8) came → come
(2) knew → know
(3) watch → watched
(4) looks → looked
(5) it → they
(6) do → did
(7) was → were
(8) came → come
解析
本题考查一般过去时的用法、助动词的用法、主谓一致以及固定搭配的用法。解题需结合语境判断时态,注意助动词后接动词原形,主谓一致以及“want to do sth.”的固定搭配:
1. 根据“Last week”可知句子用一般过去时,talk应改为过去式talked;
2. 助动词Did后接动词原形,knew要改为know;
3. 根据“last Sunday”可知句子用一般过去时,watch应改为过去式watched;
4. 描述电影内容,整体语境为过去时,looks改为looked;
5. 此处指代复数的“places and characters”,要用they代替it;
6. 描述演员在电影里的过去表现,do改为did;
7. 主语“two more films”是复数,be动词要用were;
8. “want to”后接动词原形,came改为come。
1. 根据“Last week”可知句子用一般过去时,talk应改为过去式talked;
2. 助动词Did后接动词原形,knew要改为know;
3. 根据“last Sunday”可知句子用一般过去时,watch应改为过去式watched;
4. 描述电影内容,整体语境为过去时,looks改为looked;
5. 此处指代复数的“places and characters”,要用they代替it;
6. 描述演员在电影里的过去表现,do改为did;
7. 主语“two more films”是复数,be动词要用were;
8. “want to”后接动词原形,came改为come。
Wishes go wrong
A In the book Five Children and It, the five children's wishes all go wrong. Kelly is
writing another story about the five children and a wish going wrong. Read her story
and learn how to write your own story.
You can start with "one day"
to introduce the beginning of
your story. This is a classic
storytelling phrase.
Use time phrases to connect
to the first paragraph and
show how fast the change is.
A dash is used here to
introduce something
A day at the zoo ... as animals
One day, five children met a sand fairy. It agreed to
give them a wish. "We want to be in the zoo!" said the
children.
The next minute, the children were at the zoo—but not as
visitors. The sand fairy turned them into zoo animals!
One child was a lion. He was very hungry, but there was
no food in his cage. "When will the zookeeper bring me
something to eat?" he wondered.
Use ordinal numbers to make
the story easy to follow.
The second child turned into a wolf. She wanted to run
and hunt. But there wasn't much space for running in her
cage, and there was nothing to hunt. She felt angry.
The third child became a beautiful bird, but his cage was
very small. He flew around the cage several times and
soon got bored.
The fourth child became an elephant. She wasn't happy
to have such a big body. It was very difficult to move
around! Her baby brother, the fifth child, turned into a
Use these expressions to
stress the negative feelings.
baby elephant. Many visitors at the zoo stopped to point
and look at him. He didn't like that at all!
Use a colon to introduce an
explanation.
None of the children had fun at the zoo. They learnt
a lesson: be careful about what you wish for because
sometimes what you have now is better.
◆ Structure of the article ◆
Opening: Five children met a sand fairy and made a wish.
Main body
{The wish came true, but they were turned into zoo animals.
{Each child faced a problem being an animal.
Ending: They learnt a lesson.
◆ Language bank ◆
One day, ...
The next minute, the children were at the zoo—but ...
The second child ...
... at all!
They learnt a lesson: ...
B Write your own story about five children and a wish going wrong.
A In the book Five Children and It, the five children's wishes all go wrong. Kelly is
writing another story about the five children and a wish going wrong. Read her story
and learn how to write your own story.
You can start with "one day"
to introduce the beginning of
your story. This is a classic
storytelling phrase.
Use time phrases to connect
to the first paragraph and
show how fast the change is.
A dash is used here to
introduce something
A day at the zoo ... as animals
One day, five children met a sand fairy. It agreed to
give them a wish. "We want to be in the zoo!" said the
children.
The next minute, the children were at the zoo—but not as
visitors. The sand fairy turned them into zoo animals!
One child was a lion. He was very hungry, but there was
no food in his cage. "When will the zookeeper bring me
something to eat?" he wondered.
Use ordinal numbers to make
the story easy to follow.
The second child turned into a wolf. She wanted to run
and hunt. But there wasn't much space for running in her
cage, and there was nothing to hunt. She felt angry.
The third child became a beautiful bird, but his cage was
very small. He flew around the cage several times and
soon got bored.
The fourth child became an elephant. She wasn't happy
to have such a big body. It was very difficult to move
around! Her baby brother, the fifth child, turned into a
Use these expressions to
stress the negative feelings.
baby elephant. Many visitors at the zoo stopped to point
and look at him. He didn't like that at all!
Use a colon to introduce an
explanation.
None of the children had fun at the zoo. They learnt
a lesson: be careful about what you wish for because
sometimes what you have now is better.
◆ Structure of the article ◆
Opening: Five children met a sand fairy and made a wish.
Main body
{The wish came true, but they were turned into zoo animals.
{Each child faced a problem being an animal.
Ending: They learnt a lesson.
◆ Language bank ◆
One day, ...
The next minute, the children were at the zoo—but ...
The second child ...
... at all!
They learnt a lesson: ...
B Write your own story about five children and a wish going wrong.
答案
One day, five children met a sand fairy while exploring the old garden. They cheered and made their wish, "We want to have endless candies!"
The next minute, their wish came true—but it turned into a nightmare.
The first child was buried under a mountain of lollipops. He couldn't move and felt suffocated.
The second child's teeth started hurting badly because she ate too many candies in a second. She cried out in pain.
The third child found that all his toys were covered in sticky candy. He couldn't play with any of them and felt upset.
The fourth child's clothes got stuck with melted candies. She felt uncomfortable and wanted to take them off immediately.
The fifth child was surrounded by bees attracted by the candies. He ran around but couldn't get rid of them. He didn't like that at all!
None of the children enjoyed the endless candies. They learnt a lesson: be careful about what you wish for, because sometimes what you have is already the best.
The next minute, their wish came true—but it turned into a nightmare.
The first child was buried under a mountain of lollipops. He couldn't move and felt suffocated.
The second child's teeth started hurting badly because she ate too many candies in a second. She cried out in pain.
The third child found that all his toys were covered in sticky candy. He couldn't play with any of them and felt upset.
The fourth child's clothes got stuck with melted candies. She felt uncomfortable and wanted to take them off immediately.
The fifth child was surrounded by bees attracted by the candies. He ran around but couldn't get rid of them. He didn't like that at all!
None of the children enjoyed the endless candies. They learnt a lesson: be careful about what you wish for, because sometimes what you have is already the best.
解析
模仿范文结构,以"One day"开篇引入故事开端,用"The next minute"衔接体现愿望实现的快速变化,使用序数词清晰呈现每个孩子许愿后遭遇的困境,最后点明故事蕴含的教训,同时运用题目提供的语言表达完成创作。
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